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    • evilrobot
      evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

      Your line work looks fantastic. Nice job.

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      • TessaW
        TessaW last edited by

        This is turning out great. I would suggest turning one of those guys into a woman. I find it a little distracting to just have one woman in there. Seems more natural to have a mix of genders for a crowd like this, unless there's a specific reason to have it be almost all males. If this isn't going to be colored, I would also make sure it's clear that that is indeed a bra as opposed to glasses. A pattern or some lace or something.

        Good progress. I'll be looking forward to the finished piece!

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          smithdraws last edited by

          Fun concept, and your nickname is now, " Wild Bill." 😋

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          • Dennis Spaans
            Dennis Spaans @TessaW last edited by Dennis Spaans

            @evilrobot Thanks!

            @tessw I noticed it myself as well haha, there is no specific reason on why there arent a lot of women.. The background will have more women in it. The pattern idea is good, I will use that, but I will color it anyway :). I';m tweaking it all over 🙂 . the desk will also have flowers, gifts and stuff like that.

            @smithdraws haha thanks!

            Dennis Spaans
            Website: dscomics.nl
            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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            • Sara Glennon
              Sara Glennon last edited by

              I really like this concept and your drawing is coming out great! My only suggestion would be to leave off the text of 'independent artist'. Your visual speaks to lots of people, but adding that kind of niche detail to the 'dream' might block them out again.

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              • Dennis Spaans
                Dennis Spaans @Sara Glennon last edited by

                @sara-glennon Good tip, and you're right, I'll leave that out :). Thanks!

                Dennis Spaans
                Website: dscomics.nl
                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                • Dennis Spaans
                  Dennis Spaans last edited by Dennis Spaans

                  The background crowd is ready. Sometimes not knowing where the detail ends, but decided on a row per row basis haha. Transformed the forground guy in a woman ;). Added gifts on the table. Hope you like it. Last part is behind Bill: adding security guards and a 'doorman' :). Suggestions and feedback are always welcome!!

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                  Dennis Spaans
                  Website: dscomics.nl
                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                  • TessaW
                    TessaW last edited by

                    You did an amazing job with the crowd. I'm impressed with how detailed it looks, but it's ordered so it doesn't draw too much attention and you can still focus on the foreground. Thumbs up.

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                    Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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                    • bnewman
                      bnewman last edited by

                      This is incredible! I love the many small details.

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                      • Dennis Spaans
                        Dennis Spaans last edited by Dennis Spaans

                        Well, the line work is done:

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                        and then I added shadows and contrast, that still needs a little tweaking:

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                        Whats left is coloring :)... Hope you guys like it. Comments/Suggestions are always welcome!

                        Dennis Spaans
                        Website: dscomics.nl
                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                        • DOTTYP
                          DOTTYP last edited by

                          This is amazing, great work

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                          • Dennis Spaans
                            Dennis Spaans last edited by

                            Redid the shadows, following Will Terry's 10 steps of digital painting. Quite please now :). Now colors!

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                            Dennis Spaans
                            Website: dscomics.nl
                            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                            • RHirsch
                              RHirsch @Dennis Spaans last edited by

                              @dennis-spaans Yes, I like the values better on this one too. Awesome.

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                              • Dennis Spaans
                                Dennis Spaans @RHirsch last edited by

                                @rhirsch Thanks 😃

                                Dennis Spaans
                                Website: dscomics.nl
                                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                                • Dennis Spaans
                                  Dennis Spaans last edited by

                                  Ok, the colors are done, and Im pretty proud of it. Next step: make it a dream. It will be in contrast to the cold office, so the dream is very warm and cuddly haha. Hope you like it!

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                                  Dennis Spaans
                                  Website: dscomics.nl
                                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                                  • bnewman
                                    bnewman @Dennis Spaans last edited by

                                    @dennis-spaans Love it! Can't wait to see it all put together. Tick tock!!

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                                    • Dennis Spaans
                                      Dennis Spaans last edited by

                                      Done!

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                                      Dennis Spaans
                                      Website: dscomics.nl
                                      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                                      • Chip Valecek
                                        Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                                        Turned out great!


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                                        • TessaW
                                          TessaW last edited by

                                          Great job!

                                          Website: www.tessawrathall.com

                                          Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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