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    • Jana
      Jana last edited by

      Hi everyone,
      to do some exercises for comic style backgrounds, I tried to bring Erfurt (the capitol of the German County Thuringia) into such a style.
      Both the line art and the coloring is not finished yet. I would appreciate some feedback on both. Even if I wanted to concentrate on environment, now close before finishing it seems not lively enough to me. Any ideas how to bring some life into this piece? I thought about a character in the foreground at the very right side looking to the minster. What do you think?
      Erfurt Comic Style line art.jpg
      Erfurt Comic Style colored.jpg

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      • Steve Young
        Steve Young last edited by

        Well done! to improve the scene I would add some reflected light, from the window lights to enhance your night scene.

        Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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