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    • Gary Wilkinson
      Gary Wilkinson @Andy Gray last edited by

      @andy-gray nice work Andy. i like the sketchyness of the background, but it would be nice to see that incorporate into the rendering of the character a bit more.

      I would also say to be careful of your darks and lights as it feels that there is a lot of dodging and burning going on which is causing the lighting to be a bit muddled.

      Are you planning on pushing this piece any further? It would be nice to see what he is going to battle or looking at. Is he ready to do battle with a horde of rival pirates, a kraken or his old parrot buddy who double crossed him 🙂

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      • Andy Gray
        Andy Gray @Gary Wilkinson last edited by Andy Gray

        @gary-wilkinson
        this is just exploring a bit for character. i was off colour...literally and figuratively today so can't blame you for your comments and fully appreciated. I'm looking for a way to do the drawing style which is definately me, but not using watercolours which makes it look just too much like quentin blake style to be useful for agencies. My self publsihing clients love that I can do many styles...but looking at UK agencies it really is a one person one style world. So that's my next development target.
        anyway, back to the picture. Whole thing went muddy,. If it had been the final I would have started over, but was more getting a feel for it. and yes, i tried to rescue it with dodge and burn with an airbrush. as for story, he's actually one of a gang of pirates pushing helpless hero on a gangplank (who is the fearless one)
        Usually I work in just procreate at 600dpi, or in photoshop/painter, but i am trying to find a better inkpen on ipad. used adobe sketch and when it imported to procreate it didn't show the brush texture properly as for some strange reason it was at 269dpi. Should have worked up a new 300dpi brush but didn't which left me more with chalk than pencil crayon! Really annoying.
        this is the texture I was aiming for (a piece I did last week which is done completely with a 'scribble' coloured pencil I've devloped) - what do you think? Recon it will work (if i don't mash the colours next time!) ? I want the line work, but to 'colour' using the texture, as you say.

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        • Andy Gray
          Andy Gray last edited by

          this one went a bit better in terms of the rendering+ink I was after. just done it in photoshop and painter, leaving the ipad behind
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          • Andy Gray
            Andy Gray last edited by

            been doing a bit more work on stylisation and things...maybe go for this guy as the key character. not from this angle though.
            Actual real world work (shock horror) - watercolour and coloured pencil. oh yeah...and drawn with a ruling pen (that was just a note to remind me how I did it!)
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            • Andy Gray
              Andy Gray last edited by

              i think i've nailed it. Got the evil ink pen working...got watercolour now misbehaving.... yes, its digital. Trying to make things go wrong... anyway, then into photoshop for pencil work over the top. Done...now just to enter the competition....
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              • Andy Gray
                Andy Gray last edited by Andy Gray

                getting there now. Characters designed...layout done....
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                note 2 days later....
                realised i didn't put the all important composition blobs on...

                it will help to see how I got to the composition
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                • KathrynAdebayo
                  KathrynAdebayo @Andy Gray last edited by

                  @andy-gray Thank you for sharing your process. This looks so well-thought out, and I can't wait to see the final piece. I keep thinking of how funny it might be if the kid on the plank was decked out in scuba gear or something to add to his fearlessness. 🙂 Will look forward to seeing your entry, as I find your style quite intriguing.

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                  • Andy Gray
                    Andy Gray last edited by

                    thanks for the encouragement! taking a day off of commissioned work to do this. If anyone who doesn't get paid for this is interested, sometimes I will lay aside paying work on purpose to work on stuff which will get me work in the future. This is one of them (cos i love the idea). then i will decide if it goes portfolio wise or not.

                    anyways, quick wip as I work up the pencils (corel painter...which i am really starting to enjoy working with again)

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                    • Andy Gray
                      Andy Gray last edited by

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                      • Boris Bayo
                        Boris Bayo last edited by

                        Wow! This is coming along super nice Andy. I'm really looking forward to see how it looks when it's done. I wonder what the expression is like on those pirates!

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                        • Andy Gray
                          Andy Gray last edited by

                          you mean like this....
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                          take a break for tea...

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                          • Boris Bayo
                            Boris Bayo last edited by

                            Oh, wow! That's scary, I love it!

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                            • Jason Bowen
                              Jason Bowen SVS OG last edited by

                              This is looking amazing!

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                              • Andy Gray
                                Andy Gray last edited by

                                drawing done...probably,. ink and paint tomorrow
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                                • KathrynAdebayo
                                  KathrynAdebayo @Andy Gray last edited by

                                  @andy-gray Wow! Thanks for sharing again. She looks fearless! In case it's helpful, because the sword and the plank seem to follow the same line of perspective, it appears that the sword is very long and reaches all the way to the pirate on the deck. Best wishes on coloring tomorrow. I hope you continue to update us!

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                                  • Andy Gray
                                    Andy Gray @KathrynAdebayo last edited by

                                    @kathrynadebayo good point. I was wondering about that too...and her head is too large for what i wanted as well...
                                    so...
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                                    No more adujstments now....time for inks

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                                    • Chip Valecek
                                      Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Andy Gray last edited by

                                      @andy-gray its really looking good. I can't wait to see it finished!


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                                      • Andy Gray
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                                        • Andy Gray
                                          Andy Gray last edited by

                                          colour study....
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                                          • Andy Gray
                                            Andy Gray last edited by

                                            watercolour complete...one more phase...
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