Kid Lit 411 illustration

[TraciVW]

So much fun. love the cheering colors and playful birds. I would like to see the letters thicker.

[Kelanhordos]

Looks great, I can't help but think if the music bar had some more movement to it, like a wave almost, it would help lead the eye through the picture in a more pleasing way. I feel that both shapes arcing in kind of a mirror is fighting a bit for my eye to follow them both.

Keep it up

[RHirsch]

@danettedraws Yeah, I tried that. It's not as legible, unfortunately, because it's a fun idea.

[RHirsch]

Agreed all, I will make the letters bigger, and alter either the wire or the bar staff so they don't mirror each other. Thanks for the advice.

[Gary Wilkinson]

Is the space between the "kid lit 411" and the wire needed for something later? If not it seems like wasted space to me

[rcartwright]

@gary-wilkinson Filling a space just to fill it would be a waste, nothing wrong with having spaces

[RHirsch]

Finished piece and did the possible FB banner as well. Submitting tomorrow, thanks for the extra eyes.

[Eric Castleman]

Loving it!!

[Chip Valecek]

@rhirsch turned out great!

[Kelanhordos]

Looks great