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    • MOO
      MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

      Too much white?

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      Marsha Ottum Owen

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      • aska
        aska last edited by

        white is good, makes it breathe. Looks cool 🙂

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        • demotlj
          demotlj SVS OG last edited by

          It looks nice. His pants in particular have nice texture. I don't think there's too much white, although you might want the farmer in a different color (or grayer) T shirt just so that the chickens stand out more. I also wonder about the color of the thread on the second picture because I thought his head was bleeding 🙂

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          • NizhoniWolf
            NizhoniWolf last edited by

            I'd say do a mock up with the writing in it as well, it may not seem so blanket-white then???

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            • MOO
              MOO SVS OG last edited by

              Thanks all. I will keep working on it. I might try my old color scheme and see how that works too. I liked my previous tries better I think. Here are soem of them for reference. Do you agree?

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              Marsha Ottum Owen

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              • MOO
                MOO SVS OG @demotlj last edited by

                @demotlj 🙂 Yeah, that migh tbe a problem 🙂 I tried out green on the next one but ....after I did it in red and it didn't all lift out. Not much green otherwise in th epicture though, except for grass, I guess.

                Marsha Ottum Owen

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