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    • Naroth Kean
      Naroth Kean last edited by

      @Steve-Young @daiolupo Thank you so much for the kind comment. Here my spread test. I used to have left one as a circle then I realized that they were competing with each other too much so I changed left spread to square instead. spread-testing.jpg

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      • Steve Young
        Steve Young last edited by

        They are so good, they feel like they are done traditionally, well done.

        Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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        • Lynn Larson
          Lynn Larson SVS OG @Naroth Kean last edited by

          @Naroth-Kean Beautiful! the puppy running on the beach is wonderful! Your colors flow so lovely together

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          • Thrace
            Thrace last edited by

            Really well done Naroth, these are beautiful and I love the colors! I want to buy the book when you finish!!

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            • Rob Smith
              Rob Smith last edited by

              These look good and feel traditionally done. I've got to go back and look at your tutorial!!

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              • Rich Green
                Rich Green SVS OG last edited by

                Love the colors and the feeling like we are one of the birds looking down over the little beach town!

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                • Naroth Kean
                  Naroth Kean last edited by Naroth Kean

                  Aww thanks for all complements guys I really appreciate it. I really need to find an editor to help with editing my text once i'm done with all of these.
                  I think this is what I want to call the story
                  "Buddy and Olly" or "The return of the shell necklace"
                  Spread testing with unedited textspread-testing.jpg5_Going-home.jpg

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                  • Thrace
                    Thrace @Naroth Kean last edited by

                    @Naroth-Kean this is going to be so good! Are you going to call him stray puppy the whole time? Does he become Buddy later on in the story? Just curious. In the first sentence "always" is spelled wrong, sorry it's the teacher in me. I can't wait to see more!!

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                    • Rich Green
                      Rich Green SVS OG last edited by

                      I love dogs and seeing this little guy get yelled at from the food vendor and then rummaging through the trash for something to eat really tugs at the heart strings. So I think you are really onto something here.

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                      • Naroth Kean
                        Naroth Kean last edited by

                        @Thrace-Shirley-Mears Thanks a lot Thrace for the correction. Don't be sorry about correcting my English. In fact I need it badly. And yes the little stray puppy be will named by someone later in the story.
                        @Rich-Green Thanks a lot Rich! I'm glad you see what I'm trying to do 😃

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                        • DanetteDraws
                          DanetteDraws last edited by

                          @Naroth-Kean How have you NOT got a book deal yet?! Your work is amazing! It's like a massage for my eyeballs 🙂

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                          • Naroth Kean
                            Naroth Kean last edited by

                            @DanetteDraws I guess I'm too new to children's book stuffs 😞 I was not doing illustration main before I knew SVS tho and did not have portfolio for it till recently, got my website up for less than a month and just started doing social network like others. I was a slow one. Thanks a lot for the kind comment Danette, it really makes me happy 😃

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                            Buddy and Olly (progression)
                            The little stray puppy shared some food with stray kittens on its way home.6_noticing-the-sky.jpg

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                            • Leontine
                              Leontine @Naroth Kean last edited by

                              @Naroth-Kean your style is just so lovely and unique! chapeau!

                              Leontine
                              "A picture is worth a thousand words."

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                              • Naroth Kean
                                Naroth Kean last edited by

                                @Leontine Thank you!
                                I really hope this project will work out for me. Last project on the Fox and Moon was fun but it wasn't what I really wanted, however I did learn a lot from that project especially how to produce mood and lightning for environment.
                                7_Black-sky.jpg

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                                • Naroth Kean
                                  Naroth Kean last edited by

                                  This is where all the actions begin XD, and need to rework on the stormy waves a bit I think because not flowing very well. 8_Arriving-home.jpg 9_Hurry-inside.jpg 11_The-storm-arrived.jpg 10_The-terrifying-sound.jpg

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                                  • Ace Connell
                                    Ace Connell last edited by

                                    These are stunning. I fear it'll be a tear jerker and play with my emotions haha/

                                    Keep up the awesome work
                                    Ace

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                                    • Jonathon B
                                      Jonathon B last edited by

                                      Looking good @Naroth-kean.

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                                      • Naroth Kean
                                        Naroth Kean last edited by Naroth Kean

                                        @Ace-Connell @Jonathon-B-Baker Thank you guys!
                                        I think I like the design of this wave better, simple.
                                        13_Dragging.jpg 12_Dragging-by-the-waves.jpg

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