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    • Jiří Kůs
      Jiří Kůs last edited by

      So it is Inktober the 1st and in this thread I shall drop all I draw this month. I will be happy for any critique.

      For the first image I used just pigma micron 0.35 and it was supposed to be a fan art of Motoko Kusanagi, but I kinda drifted away... so lets call it a "cyber girl" 🙂 I used mainly this as a pose reference: http://pyjama-cake.deviantart.com/art/FEMALE-Basics-2-3-559980382
      inktober_01.jpg

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      • Jiří Kůs
        Jiří Kůs last edited by

        Day 2. I had this in mind for a loong time. I dont know when it came to me, but for years I wanted to draw a naked woman riding a chicken. I really have no idea how it came to me. And at last I got to do this character. In the end I gave it sort of native american look... After finishing it I noticed a printed picture on my desk for ink practice... darn, Jake also did a character riding a giant rooster, so I am not original at all 🙂 Well...

        inktober_02.jpg

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        • Naroth Kean
          Naroth Kean last edited by

          love these! the only think I would suggest is to balance out the detail. I would give more detail to the first image like her hair. I really love second image!!! haha love female rooster/chicken warrior.

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          • Flabiano
            Flabiano last edited by

            Great work.

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            • Jiří Kůs
              Jiří Kůs @Naroth Kean last edited by

              @Naroth-Kean I dont really know where would I put that details in her hair. You mean like adding some shadow to it?

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              • Rob Smith
                Rob Smith last edited by

                These are great! Maybe a little more detail in the first character's hair would add to the image?

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                • Jiří Kůs
                  Jiří Kůs last edited by

                  @rob-smith @Naroth-Kean Oh maan, I just dont know what is up with the hair 😃 Can somebody draw over?
                  Also,
                  day 2.5 ...#sketch_dailies wanted me to draw Cthulhu..so I had to 😃
                  inktober_02.5.jpg

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                  • Jiří Kůs
                    Jiří Kůs last edited by

                    Day3
                    Followup to rooster rider, ...anatomy wrong, perspevtibe wrong..damn

                    inktober_03.jpg

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                    • Lynn Larson
                      Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                      i like it! i want to draw wrong like you do hehe

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                      • Jiří Kůs
                        Jiří Kůs last edited by

                        Day 4 - I call this "Bulbulea Vulgaris" and it is redraw from a drawing 4 years old...aaand it is not really better, but it took much less time 🙂 I guess I did not improve when it comes to drawing trees. original drawing: http://terrmith.deviantart.com/art/Bulbulea-Vulgaris-252601163

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                        • Naroth Kean
                          Naroth Kean last edited by

                          yes some shadow or line work detail would be nice or even fill her hair with what you did to the second image. Here I drew over a bit Untitled-1.jpg

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                          • Jiří Kůs
                            Jiří Kůs @Naroth Kean last edited by

                            @Naroth-Kean Thanks!

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                            • Jiří Kůs
                              Jiří Kůs last edited by

                              Day 5 - Mr. Ostrich got insanely rich after invention of the airplane.

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                              • Lynn Larson
                                Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                                Traded the aviator hat for a top hat...niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice hehehehe

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                                  Nille Horgen last edited by

                                  Hi! I have not read all the comments so i am not sure it has been said already. First of all i love you imagination, and the variations in all the drawings. About the "critique" it seems like you are having the same problem as me, with the proportions of the body. And drawing feet, hands aand volume in theese areas. Trying to work on it myself with forcing myself to study some anatomy :S good luck on inktober! And looking forward to seing more of your work.

                                  Love nille

                                  Love Nille

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                                  • Paulina Orellana
                                    Paulina Orellana last edited by

                                    wow, i like the girls, the animals are so lovely, they had a lot personality

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                                    • Jiří Kůs
                                      Jiří Kůs @Nille Horgen last edited by

                                      @Nille-Horgen Yeah, anatomy is endless struggle. I go to figure drawing classes, I practiced drawing a hand whole summer..adn still suck at it 😃 Probably less than a year ago, but still make mistakes.. and there is always that little voice telling me "put her hand behind her back, screw the hands!"

                                      Anyway

                                      Day 6 - Man in black... and pink
                                      Tried ink wash...failed... have to learn how to use that 🙂 Reflection on that gun was also fixed so many times it turned black 😃
                                      inktober_06.jpg

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                                        Nille Horgen last edited by

                                        Hehehe so agree on the hand on the back. So attempting!

                                        Love Nille

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                                        • Jiří Kůs
                                          Jiří Kůs last edited by

                                          Day 7 - Clint Eastwizard
                                          ..well there is not much likeness, but thats what I was going for 🙂
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                                          • Steve Young
                                            Steve Young last edited by

                                            Nice going keep it up!

                                            Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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