Delicious Sketches (Feedback Welcome)

[Jack B]

The Story Continues...

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[Naroth Kean]

looks great! I would watch out for your white line around the box on the first image, I think the line need to define the shape of the box a bit better, maybe another white line between the fold and the flap of the box. I see a word means Death lol, interesting! keep us posted

[Jack B]

@Naroth-Kean said:

looks great! I would watch out for your white line around the box on the first image, I think the line need to define the shape of the box a bit better, maybe another white line between the fold and the flap of the box. I see a word means Death lol, interesting! keep us posted

Thanks for the comment! That is good advice too, I will see if I can go in and correct it. And yes, I am not fluent in Japanese but you are correct.

[Jack B]

Day 5 of Inktober!

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[Steve Young]

Interesting technique of outlining your figures.

[Jack B]

Having fun but I am going to put the story on Hiatus for now

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[Ace Connell]

@Jack-B The construction on this one is awesome.

Ace

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