Used Will Terry´s Suggestions (results)

[Art Dud]

Here are the results of the suggestions @Will-Terry made. I don’t know it it was so bad he just had to say something, or he saw a spark of potential in this rookie illustrator. I am going with the latter! His suggestion was in regard to the overal design. See below. Did I apply the suggestion okay?

@will-terry-art suggestions:

Dud’s tweaks:

Applying the tweaks in a painting:

[Art Dud]

Oh....the goal was to convey....slight determination, yet innocently looking for adventure!