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    • Ace Connell
      Ace Connell last edited by

      This is god damn gorgeous!

      Ace

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      • Dulcie
        Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

        @Rich-Green @Naroth-Kean and @Ace-Connell thank you all for your kind and encouraging words. I've been trying for so long to find a way of painting that captures the images in my head, in the way I want them to. So much frustration along the way! (especially with capricious watercolour) But combined with digital might just be the way forward...will just have to keep drawing πŸ™‚

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        • Sarah LuAnn
          Sarah LuAnn SVS OG last edited by

          Love this! Such fun characters. I love the dragon's expression. The first thing I noticed, which has already kind of been mentioned, Is that the color of the dragon's belly is very similar to the color of the ground. I feel it would communicate better that it is a separate object if the color on one or the other was changed.

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          • Dulcie
            Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

            Thanks @Sarah-LuAnn for the feedback, much appreciated πŸ™‚ I'm going to tweak it this evening and see what I can do.

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              A Former User @Dulcie last edited by

              @Dulcie Lovely work. It's so playful and I like the water colour textures.

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              • mattramsey
                mattramsey last edited by

                This is so great. I love the mouse character. The dragon has a very "Dino" (Flintstones) look to him/her.

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                • Leontine
                  Leontine last edited by

                  oh yeah! wonderful! As said earlier, you could work on the shadow on the ground. Lights and shadows a bit...It really speaks gorgeous!

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                  • Nancy Gormezano
                    Nancy Gormezano last edited by

                    Very gorgeous rendering, terrific character design, sweet composition !

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                    • Dulcie
                      Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                      Thank you @Nightseye @mattramsey @Leontine for your thoughts and encouragement, it's really nice to know when you're on the right track! I've deepened the shadows on the ground and contact shadows, hope that helps separate the tummy from the ground a bit more... I think I'm done now.

                      @mattramsey yes I can see what you mean about the 'Dino' look - it was going to be a green dragon but that didn't work against the foliage.

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                      • Leontine
                        Leontine last edited by

                        Wonderful! It just screams for a short story. I am so curious of what happens next. Is the mouse running of of will he throw a stick? ...Than the dragon is really going to make some pits into the soil...XD

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                        • Ace Connell
                          Ace Connell @Dulcie last edited by

                          @Dulcie The delicate inquisitive look that the mouse has really is perfect.

                          Ace

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                          • Will Terry
                            Will Terry @Dulcie last edited by

                            @Dulcie I got a huge grin on my face after seeing your beautiful illustration this morning! I'm tickled that my class helped - it feels very tradtional!

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                            • Lynn Larson
                              Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                              this is so amazing! the expressions are fantastic! you could always go red or blue if you want to avoid Dino, but i love the purple so i think it's great!! making the nose skinnier would pull away from that as well πŸ™‚ he's just too cute to mess with in my opinion hehe

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                              • Dulcie
                                Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                                @Leontine I haven’t decided what happens next (maybe I should decide!) but my thoughts are that the dragon has just woken up from a loooong hibernation, and everything is new and amazing.

                                @Ace-Connell Thank you πŸ™‚

                                @Will-Terry Thank you, I’m delighted that it made you smile.

                                @Lynn-Larson I agree that red and blue are also great colours for a dragon, and also yes about the nose, I like dragons with pointy noses too. I will draw more dragons! So many possibilities…

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                                • amberwingart
                                  amberwingart last edited by

                                  This is gorgeous! I love the style, the story and the characters. I'm also really coveting your background & foliage skills! πŸ™‚

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                                  • Dulcie
                                    Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                                    @amberwingart Hey thanks, that's very kind of you to say πŸ™‚ Hoping to return to doing more dragons soon...

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                                    • smoke
                                      smoke last edited by

                                      i like it a lot!! nice piece!! πŸ˜ƒ thanks for sharing πŸ™‚

                                      smoke

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                                      • Dulcie
                                        Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                                        @smoke Thank you πŸ™‚

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                                        • Rob Smith
                                          Rob Smith last edited by

                                          @Dulcie Great image and technique. Such good storytelling with this image. I too am waiting to turn the page!

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                                          • bharris
                                            bharris last edited by

                                            OH so good! I love your characters and soft background. Can't wait to take that course now.

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