Before and After at the beginning.....

[MOO]

I wanted to share one of my first submissions to the old Third Thursday prompts. I think you can tell that, with the help of SVS forum members, the second version turned out a lot better. Hopefully, I'm still getting better ......

[Gabriel Lung]

Hey @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen, this is coming along nicely! I think the something you could do is extend the ground plane so that is encircles all the characters. Right now my eye is going directly towards the tangent with the baby and ground plane. Extending the ground plane could unify this piece better. Hope that helps!

[shinjifujioka]

Yes, the second one shows a lot of great improvement! That just goes to show how willing a student you are Poses, expressions, character design...everything just leveled up!