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    • Leontine
      Leontine @Ace Connell last edited by

      @Ace-Connell Yeaaah join in the fun!

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      • Jonathon B
        Jonathon B last edited by

        Really like the second hedgehog. That's my fave.

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        • shinjifujioka
          shinjifujioka SVS OG last edited by

          Really cute hedgehogs! I saw a hedgehog in real life for the first time not too long ago. Cute little buggers.

          I have no idea how Sonic the hedgehog is a hedgehog.

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          • Leontine
            Leontine @shinjifujioka last edited by

            @shinjifujioka me neither. thanks for the kind words.

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            • Thrace
              Thrace last edited by

              I love your picture, your hedgehog is adorable!!! I am looking forward to seeing it painted!!

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              • Rich Green
                Rich Green SVS OG last edited by

                Very cute! Looking forward to seeing this in color next!

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                • Dulcie
                  Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                  @Leontine I will try and draw some hedgehogs soon then 🙂 gotta finish my Poe but hopefully after that I can return to the cute side...

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                  • Steve Young
                    Steve Young last edited by

                    A great little concept!

                    Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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                    • Leontine
                      Leontine @Leontine last edited by

                      Leontine Gaasenbeek Hedgehog.jpg Here's the colored version of my hedgehog. Shall I leave the moon out? how about these falling leaves, are they distracting? suggestions are welcome! thanks!

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                      • Jiří Kůs
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                        • Jana
                          Jana last edited by

                          Hi, Leontine!
                          You captured the mood of a forest in a fall night pretty well! 🙂 I would let the moon in. Especially, because you managed the two light sources niceley.
                          About the falling leaves, they bring a lot of fall atmosphere. I would change a bit their movement, though. You might try to make them look more naturally falling. You might also add some more leaves which reached already the ground.
                          Something like this:falling leaves.jpg
                          Very cute peace overall. 🙂

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                          • Jiří Kůs
                            Jiří Kůs last edited by

                            Very cute 😃
                            But it seems a bit dark to me, just tiny bit. Especially compared to the moon. I feel it might be stealing attention from the hedgehog.

                            Concerning the leaves... they fee a bitl weird an unnatural or artificial to me. They fall straight down, I dont think leaves fall this way. It is just a gut feeling.. They blend a bit with the background since they have exact same pattern as branches on the background trees. Light might be also a bit off since they are quite close to the lantern, but quite dark.

                            EDIT: my contrast on was too low and it was way darker than it really is, sorrry

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                            • Ace Connell
                              Ace Connell last edited by Ace Connell

                              It's looking lovely. I'd just be a bit more conscious of the texture throughout. If you look near the moon, there's a ton of texture, whereas the grass just looks like an airbrush gradient. I'm liking the composition. I think the leaves could maybe do to be a bit smaller, but the character design is lovely.

                              Ace

                              EDIT: Also the hedgehog... The spikes are amazingly textured and then the body looks a bit digital to me.

                              Hope this helps.

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                              • Thrace
                                Thrace last edited by

                                Lovely image! I would take the leaves out you don't need them and I would remove some of the texture around the moon. I love your characters, adorable!!

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                                • Jana
                                  Jana last edited by

                                  My feeling is that the mood of fall would get a bit lost without the falling leaves. You might add then some fall related structure on the ground or more fall related colors, like with the acorn.

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                                  • Leontine
                                    Leontine last edited by

                                    adjusted version...more leaves on the soil?
                                    leontine gaasenbeek hedgehog 4.jpg

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                                    • Leontine
                                      Leontine @Jana last edited by

                                      @Jana danke schön Jana, soll ich weitere Blätter hinzufügen?

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                                      • Leontine
                                        Leontine @Jiří Kůs last edited by

                                        @Jiří-Kůs thank you, I ve worked on the piece a bit. How about now?

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                                        • Leontine
                                          Leontine @Ace Connell last edited by

                                          @Ace-Connell Hi Ace, worked on it a bit, what do you think?

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                                          • Jana
                                            Jana last edited by

                                            Wow, Leontine, the piece improved even more. 🙂 I like the texture you have added to Miss Hedgehog.
                                            Maybe two more leaves, like close to the stones... That might be fine.
                                            Your German speaking brought me a big smile! 🙂

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