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    • Steve Young
      Steve Young last edited by

      I the pose is really good, make sure you put plenty of atmospheric perspective with in it.

      Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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        merri bun last edited by

        these are SO GOOD

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          Alberto M last edited by Alberto M

          it's not going to be finished tomorrow, at this speed maybe not this year 😢

          wasted all morning testing how I could paint/draw it, it's going sketchy

          oh, and no jack at all

          le-kek2.jpg

          if you read the story, jack is a thieft and a murder, such a child story haha

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          • Steve Young
            Steve Young last edited by

            Wonderful!

            Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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            • kai satoshi
              kai satoshi @Alberto M last edited by

              @Alberto-M

              So true... All these kids stories from back in the day are so odd when you think about it.

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              • Jiří Kůs
                Jiří Kůs last edited by

                Too bad, it looks awesome!

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                  Alberto M last edited by Alberto M

                  It's going somewhere
                  I think I'm not gonna render it, instead, i'll do more linework with just a soft plain colors with gradiation. :l

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                  peasant outfit is peasant

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                    Alberto M last edited by

                    played around too much as I have no process yet
                    colormess.jpg

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                    • Steve Young
                      Steve Young last edited by

                      This is coming along really well,

                      Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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                        Alberto M last edited by

                        passed to the next thing, I was kinda blocked in last one :l

                        sketch.jpg

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                          Alberto M last edited by

                          hard part

                          sketchgray.jpg

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                          • Steve Young
                            Steve Young last edited by

                            **

                            • Wow!**

                            Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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                            • Naroth Kean
                              Naroth Kean last edited by

                              love these, you are so good. Apsara looks great.

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                                Alberto M last edited by

                                Can't do it as I want, my feels r worse than hers haha
                                might restart from lineart as I have a disability to keep working over things already there, this does not happen me while I draw, just when I paint 😞 atm I feel like I need brain surgery haha

                                Godess-color22.jpg

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                                • Naroth Kean
                                  Naroth Kean last edited by

                                  OMG we are the opposite, i can't draw but paint, line work makes me go crazy, I get lost in lines but i love lines. Confused haha

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                                  • Steve Young
                                    Steve Young last edited by

                                    Wonderful!

                                    Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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                                      Alberto M last edited by

                                      droped the coloring, went back to older file to take back values ha ha, will try to color after I end the paint totally in grayscale and then watch a tutorial before trying to color so I stop doing experiments and wasting time gaining nothin

                                      I need more lights there
                                      values.jpg

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                                      • Lee White
                                        Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                        Hey Alberto, maybe I can help some here. If you notice the quick paint over I did below, you will see a few things. When I converted your image to greyscale it turned to basically dark on dark which is extremely difficult to pull off. When planning your values try to keep it simple. Think "Is this a light shape on a dark background, or a dark shape on top of a lighter one?" That way it keeps everything clear. I did the quick paint over here and tried to pull out her face some and soften that lighting stripe in the background. It all just depends on where you want the emphasis. John Singer Sergent painted beautiful images with the figure dark and the background light. So that can be done here too. You just need to decide which way you want to go with it.

                                        Hope that helps some... : )

                                        Cheers,
                                        Lee

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                                          Alberto M last edited by

                                          Thanks you very much! It was brightened already from !http://forum.svslearn.com/uploads/files/1437661186671-values.jpg, and it's now even more, but still need clear value ranges as you pointed out to be readable, the way to pop out the face and the body gotta be stronger, will apply these points, kudos

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                                            Alberto M last edited by Alberto M

                                            update
                                            should I push brights on bg or her?

                                            wip.jpg
                                            vs
                                            wip-lighter-bg.jpg
                                            seems that it reads better on second, but gotta do a better layer than that

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