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    • MOO
      MOO SVS OG @IgorWoznicki last edited by

      @IgorWoznicki Good thoughts! I hadn't really thought of the stars being moved around though I did realize they were flat. If I end up redoing it I will play around with that. I was thinking of adding a bit of an edge to them but never did....hmmm....Thanks!

      Marsha Ottum Owen

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      • MOO
        MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

        Here's my revised painting. The picture was taken last night with my phone. I definitely need to scan it and play around with it in GIMP, I think to make the colors better

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        I think the photo looks worse than the actual painting but, here's the enhanced (with my cell phone stuff) version. It's amazing what a difference it makes!

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        Marsha Ottum Owen

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        • TessaW
          TessaW last edited by

          This is the best I've seen you photograph and edit your work and it makes such a huge difference! Great job. The star instruments are such a creative idea!

          Website: www.tessawrathall.com

          Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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          • MOO
            MOO SVS OG @TessaW last edited by

            @TessaW Thank you, Tessa! That means a lot coming from you 😀

            Marsha Ottum Owen

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            • K
              Kat SVS OG last edited by

              I love this! It’s just adorable, really. And you did a great job on the revision. Just love it 🙂

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              • MOO
                MOO SVS OG @Kat last edited by

                @Kat Thank you!

                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                • IgorWoznicki
                  IgorWoznicki last edited by

                  I always love seeing how you apply all the feedback you get! 😄
                  I've seen some people asking for feedback and never actually doing anything people suggest them to do...Heck, I've even done that myself! 😞
                  Seeing how serious you're bout that is quite motivating ☺

                  Spreading art and positive vibes!

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                  • MOO
                    MOO SVS OG @IgorWoznicki last edited by

                    ☺️ Thanks

                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                    • BichonBistro
                      BichonBistro @MOO last edited by

                      @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen wow, great incorporation of @IgorWoznicki idea to give the stars dimension—the color looks wonderful too! This is a really fun piece ❤️

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                      • MOO
                        MOO SVS OG @BichonBistro last edited by

                        @BichonBistro thanks 😀

                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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