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      Kevin Terry last edited by

      Hey! I'm brand new here! I got on for Slowvember for which I have chosen to draw Spider man vs. Sandman. I have done my R&D and my 50+ thumbnails. Now I am hoping for feedback on my value studies. What I am going for is action and excitement. That thing when you see a comic cover and want to know what is inside. So, if you would be so kind as to let me know which one works the best I would greatly appreciate it. !!valuestudy4.jpg valuestudy3.jpg valuestudy2.jpg valuestudy1.jpg

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        KaraDaniel last edited by

        I'm really drawn to the third one down...its really a good in your face feeling like many comics. Sandman's facial expression is great.

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          Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Kevin Terry last edited by

          @Kevin-Terry I agree with @KaraDaniel the third one is the strongest one. I can see that as a cover.


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            bugeyefly last edited by

            Yeah, the third one for me too. Lots of diagonals, lots of energy. And you feel more immersed in the action with the characters breaking out of the frame like that. Looks great.

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              Kevin Terry @KaraDaniel last edited by

              @KaraDaniel thanks so much for the great feedback. I really appreciate it!

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                Kevin Terry @Chip Valecek last edited by

                @Chip-Valecek thanks for looking at my work and for the encouraging words.

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                  braden H last edited by

                  I'm agreement with everyone about the third one being the strongest composition 🙂

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                    Kevin Terry @braden H last edited by

                    @Braden-Hallett thanks for the feedback.

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