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    • braden H
      braden H @MichaelaH last edited by

      @MichaelaH I friggin' love autumn πŸ™‚

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      • braden H
        braden H @xin li last edited by

        @xin-li Sometimes I just paint overtop with whatever colour i want, too πŸ™‚ This one though I like as is.

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        • xin li
          xin li @braden H last edited by

          @Braden-Hallett thanks for the explaintion. Hmm. Your colorize layer does not look muddy or overly saturated. I do that as well, I often having a hard time with colorizing, because it feels a bit random. I eventually got something I satisfied, but it feels like a guessing game for me. I think I will just do more of paint overtop with whatever color :-).

          Web: www.lixin.no
          IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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          • braden H
            braden H last edited by

            Sketch!

            I think I redrew that friggin' mouse rider at least 12 times.

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            • braden H
              braden H last edited by

              Hyah!

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                jdubz last edited by jdubz

                Being 100% honest, I like the silhouette of the mouse rider's head/hat area much better that you had in the color value test. Just looking at them side by side the shapes looks a lot stronger at first glance.

                Trying to come up with a technical reason for that, maybe the hat is taking my eye too far to the right and out of the image?

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                Curious how others feel about it or if it was just me.

                Josh White
                https://www.instagram.com/joshwhiteillustration/

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                • braden H
                  braden H @jdubz last edited by

                  @jdubz I absolutely agree! I much prefer the original silhouette.

                  I spent a good hour drawing and redrawing and redrawing and couldn't get it to look right, so I decided to move forward with an option that worked 'okay'.

                  I'm gonna try redrawing the mouserider so that it more closely follows the original sihl, though.

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                  • braden H
                    braden H last edited by

                    Redid an idea and used the colours I'm planning on using for the slowvember piece as well as the process that I've worked out.

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                    • xin li
                      xin li last edited by

                      Beautiful color. also I started to notice your unique way of paint cloud in the background πŸ™‚

                      Web: www.lixin.no
                      IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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                      • chrisaakins
                        chrisaakins @xin li last edited by chrisaakins

                        @Braden-Hallett How are you so prolific at this? Do you have a job/family responsibilities or is this your full time work? I am amazed at your work ethic and passion (as well as your art). I'd be interested in knowing what a typical Braden Hallett day looks like.

                        Chris Akins
                        www.chrisakinsart.com
                        www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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                        • braden H
                          braden H last edited by

                          @xin-li I do like drawin' them clouds πŸ™‚

                          @chrisaakins I saved up some money when I was working as a teacher in the butt-end of nowhere BC. Right now I have no responsibilities, so I'm doing this full time πŸ™‚ I wake up at 5:00, work from 6:30 - 9:30, then 10:00 to 11:30, and then 1:30 to 3:00. So a good 6 hours of drawing minimum. Then I fit in some sketching and whatever I feel like for the rest of the evening.

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                          • braden H
                            braden H last edited by

                            Second process and colour test.

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                            • braden H
                              braden H last edited by

                              Rough paint. Throwin' colour around. Pretty much ready to settle in and paaaaaaaaaaint away. Hooray!

                              @jdubz I resketched and reinked the mouse rider a few more times. For some strange reason this was still the best option of the inked versions both for sense of movement and silh. I still love the original silhouette, though πŸ™‚

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                              • Chip Valecek
                                Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                                @Braden-Hallett said in Slowvember progress.:

                                I have no responsibilities

                                Man am I jealous!!! I wish I would have done something like that. I'm lucking to get an hour a day to do art with crazy ass job and crazy ass family LOL.


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                                • braden H
                                  braden H @Chip Valecek last edited by

                                  @Chip-Valecek It is both fun and terrifying :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat: But better to try it earlier rather than later πŸ™‚

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                                  • braden H
                                    braden H last edited by

                                    I think I'm ready to paint away. Huzzah!

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                                    • KaraDaniel
                                      KaraDaniel @braden H last edited by

                                      @Braden-Hallett This is fantastic. I want to read my kids this story!

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                                      • braden H
                                        braden H @KaraDaniel last edited by

                                        @KaraDaniel Thanks πŸ˜ƒ I'm getting a lot out of this project

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                                        • KathrynAdebayo
                                          KathrynAdebayo last edited by

                                          Braden, this is awesome! I love the characters and the adventures they’re having. Especially Charlie and mouse! πŸ˜„I know this is late in the game, so feel free to ignore, but just thought I’d offer the observation that, at least for me, my eye is drawn to the spot where the wing, hill and fence touch. Thank you for sharing. I love this. πŸ™‚

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                                          • Neha Rawat
                                            Neha Rawat last edited by

                                            @Braden-Hallett Wow! Brilliant work! I love love LOVE how you've documented all your research and practice. Thank you so much for that!
                                            I really love the coolness of the sky with the warmth of the field and the characters and the super dynamic poses.

                                            I'd like to share a few thoughts (these are some nitty gritties because with a wonderful piece like this, that's all you can find!)

                                            1. The angle at which the hat is flying based on the distance from the kid doesn't seem realistic. If it has flown of the kids head, it would be rotated about 120 degrees clockwise (almost upturned)
                                            2. I'm not sure what the shadow is of the rabbits chin at bottom left but it's creating an assumed tangent line along the fence and is a little distracting.
                                            3. And I agree with @KathrynAdebayo about the eye being drawn to the spot where the wing, hill and fence touch. Unless that's intentional, I feel it would be nicer to have some space around the tip of the wing.

                                            Wonderful piece! Your work is an inspiration! πŸ™‚

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