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      lindsayturtle last edited by lindsayturtle

      Hi all! I’m new here. Thank you for sharing all your incredible work! I was hoping you wouldn’t mind taking a look at my sketch for Slowvember before I start painting. I would be so grateful for any criticisms even if you think I should scrap the whole thing 😂

      Also I’m old and can’t figure out how to make my image show up here. So if you know how to do that then clue an old lady in. Hopefully at least the link works.

      Lindsay
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        Pamela Fraley SVS OG @lindsayturtle last edited by

        @lindsayturtle the link is working! I like the idea of this. It reminds me of Peter Pan. ☺️The angle is a bit distracting think. I like the idea of a dramatic angle, but I think it would be cool to be pointing more out the window so we can see where they are off to.

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          lindsayturtle @Pamela Fraley last edited by

          @Pamela-Fraley thank you! I’ll play around with that!

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          • Chip Valecek
            Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @lindsayturtle last edited by

            @lindsayturtle if you click on the icon of the cloud with the arrow you can upload the image. Make sure that it uploads in your preview window before you click submit.

            As far as the composition of your piece I agree with @Pamela-Fraley about the angle. It could be that you just need to add the additional detail around the window.


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              lindsayturtle @Chip Valecek last edited by

              @Chip-Valecek Thank you!!

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                carlianne last edited by

                @lindsayturtle said in Slowvember feedback:

                ge show up here. So if you know how to do that then clue an old lady in. Hopefully at least the link works.
                Lindsay

                I agree about the angle, it's so steep that it's almost disoreinting/dizzying. I like that you aren't doing it straight on, but maybe just less steep?

                Check out my art and tutorials :)

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