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    • MOO
      MOO SVS OG last edited by

      I think I'm done with this. Not sure I worked long enough on it for slowvember though. If there are any tips for improving it (without starting over completely) I'm open to them. This is watercolor so keepp that in mind šŸ™‚

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      Marsha Ottum Owen

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      • Heather Boyd
        Heather Boyd @MOO last edited by Heather Boyd

        @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen my eyes are attracted to the leaves at the bottom first then your fairy due to vibrancy and the contrast. Whether this time you can edit it or not, I’d find a way to ensure your fairy is the first thing seen.

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        • KaraDaniel
          KaraDaniel last edited by

          Your background is beautiful! I love the watercolor effect there and on the trees. Check out and see what it looks like to you when its cropped in a little tighter...seems like theres a lot of excess space around your main focus of the cute little fairy.

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          • MOO
            MOO SVS OG @KaraDaniel last edited by MOO

            @KaraDaniel Thank you! I do have some extra space around it. I will try cropping it on GIMP and see if I can make an improvement. Thanks!

            Marsha Ottum Owen

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            • MOO
              MOO SVS OG @Heather Boyd last edited by

              @Heather-Boyd Thank you, I see how that could happen. I'll try toning the leaves down a little and see if that helps. I can see how they could distract the eye now that you mention it.

              Marsha Ottum Owen

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              • MOO
                MOO SVS OG last edited by

                I darkened up the leaves and cropped it a bit.

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                Marsha Ottum Owen

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