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    • braden H
      braden H @KathrynAdebayo last edited by

      @KathrynAdebayo Thanks 😃 I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm havin' a good time with this so far.

      That cluster of similar values and tangents in the fence/wing/hill area is definitely going to be a point of concern! But I think I've got an idea of how to solve it 🙂

      Thanks for the feedback!

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        braden H @Neha Rawat last edited by

        @Neha-Rawat Thanks! I hadn't noticed the implied tangent with the rabbit chin shadow. It's totally where that fence would be running behind it.

        Thanks for the feedback 😃 I love the nitty gritty stuff. It always gives me something to think about for next time (There's some stuff I ain't fixin at this stage, lol :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat: )

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        • braden H
          braden H @LauraA last edited by

          @LauraA Iiiiiiiinteresting! There may be a way I can subtly lower the fence just a wee bit.

          Thanks for the feedback 🙂

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          • braden H
            braden H last edited by

            Work continues...

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              ZeeZeeMonster @braden H last edited by

              @Braden-Hallett I like how you lowered the fence. It looks great and now the wings don't look like they're brushing up against it.

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              • LauraA
                LauraA SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                @Braden-Hallett Bravo! Now it looks like the hawk calculated just right.

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                • theprairiefox
                  theprairiefox last edited by

                  @Braden-Hallett I just had a thought as I was looking at this. I was thinking about where everyone is looking and they are leading you off the page (except the rabbit who is helping to bring you back in.) And I think the movement is ok, but in a book you usually want the reader to be moving off the page to right?

                  When you are done, you might want to consider flipping the image?

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                  I think it kind of feels better...

                  -The Prairie Fox
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                  • braden H
                    braden H @theprairiefox last edited by

                    @theprairiefox I'll absolutely consider it! Though I'm fine with the hawk reading first 🙂 I'll keep it in the back of my mind as I carry on

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                    • braden H
                      braden H last edited by

                      Work continues! I get to do a bit more work messing up the lines on the mouse and the hawk, and then spoon some colour around, but done very soon!

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                      • braden H
                        braden H last edited by

                        I'm tentatively calling this one done. If anyone can think of any tweaks or small changes to be made at this point it would be much appreciated 🙂

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