December WIP

[lmrush]

"Can we talk about the elephant in the room?" I'd love to hear your critiques feedback if you have time-thanks in advance!

[lmrush]

I also tried it in watercolor a

[Heather Boyd]

@lmrush It definitly makes me feel sad, almost weepy. I would push the story more and not just rely on the "elephant in the room". Let your why really tell the story. I would keep to something you've experienced or have been effected by (family, friends). Right now I feel really bad for the elephant baby because you have isolated her because she's an elephant -I am trying hard not have this come off as mean (sorry if it does). With a further back story and more description in the room could really help.

[lmrush]

@Heather-Boyd thank you Heather my original sketch had them in a nursery room, blocks pull toys, I have no idea why it didn't make it to the final painting, Ill keep at it-thanks

[lmrush]

Thank you @Heather-Boyd for feedback I like the new image better because of you-thanks!