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    • Naroth Kean
      Naroth Kean last edited by

      I love the color so much and the character as well. I prefer eyes close but if you want them open I think you might want a little white dot or sparkling in her eyes.

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      • Dan Tavis
        Dan Tavis last edited by Dan Tavis

        I prefer the eyes closed, because she has her eyes open then seems to be paying more attention to the viewer rather than enjoying the moment in the snow. Awesome job!

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        • joanie stone
          joanie stone last edited by

          I too prefer the eyes closed and I really like the colors in these. One minor thing that I noticed was her chin seems a little long, you might want to lower her facial features a tad to make her look more child-like.

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          • Rob Smith
            Rob Smith last edited by

            @joanie-stone Thanks for your suggestions. That seems to be a trend with me. Here is a the revised image with the facial features set a little lower on the head.

            catching_snow_rev3.jpg

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            • Dan Tavis
              Dan Tavis last edited by

              Nice! Beautiful colors by the way. I use M.Graham watercolors as well 😃 awesome paints

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              • Leontine
                Leontine @Rob Smith last edited by

                @Rob-Smith Oh wow Rob, its really working out! warm, fun and fresh! The snowflakes are awesome! I want to learn to work with watercolor tooo! I am working on mine btw...maybe I finish up tonight 😃

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                • Rich Green
                  Rich Green SVS OG @Rob Smith last edited by

                  @Rob-Smith I always really enjoy your colors - it adds so much fun, interest and joy to your artwork!

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                  • Rob Smith
                    Rob Smith last edited by

                    I recently went back and re-visited the original painting/idea. I made some changes digitally to the image and renamed it "Its Snowing".

                    Its_Snowing.jpg

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                    • Bobby Aquitania
                      Bobby Aquitania last edited by

                      Great pieces all, on the this last one, maybe change the sunflower to something more Xmas-sie? A star, reindeer, or candy cane? The green contrast makes me think this is the first snow, maybe a light blue glaze on top would show the weather transition more?

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                      • Rob Smith
                        Rob Smith last edited by

                        @Bobby-Aquitania Thanks for the suggestion!

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