feedback on Isolation WIP?
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Hey guys! First time poster...I'm just discovering what a great resource SVS is!
I've been working on the "isolation" prompt and I'm wondering if anyone wants to weigh in on the lighting scheme here...is it too subtle/weird? Think I should emphasize the focal point more?
I was also considering getting rid of the on-camera window and replacing it with a more straightforward off-camera light source, from the right side. Would love your thoughts on that, too. Thanks so much! I'm loving all your entries so far.
Em
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@gavpartridge yep, those were exactly my concerns--confusing shadows/light source. Thank you!!
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@esgoldman I love all of the fun things going on. The size of the person to the room also gives a very nice 'isolation' feel, good job.
I was wondering about the strings on ground? I am not quite figuring the story with those. At first, I thought they were plugs or maybe yarn. Just a little confusing. If they are yarn, I think I would make the ball more of a yarn ball if they are electric maybe put lights or something on the big ball?
Just a thought.
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@theprairiefox yes that's a great point! i'll definitely clarify those elements.
