Sketch Feedback Please

[NelsonYiap]

Hi, I'm doing this commission for a friend and wanted to get some feedback on the sketch. Would love to hear your thoughts!

[Jeremy Ross]

Hi @NelsonYiap, are you adding text? There’s a big white space on the left. What’s the story you’re commissioned for?

[Neha Rawat]

@NelsonYiap It's a cute sketch. The characters are fun and expressive. I agree a little insight into the story would help us give better feedback.