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    Kris Knight Art - Critiques always Welcome, as I am here to improve

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    • kai satoshi
      kai satoshi @Alberto M last edited by kai satoshi

      @Alberto-M
      Thanks Alberto. I'll definitely be playing around with some of the things you are talking about. It may take me a while :). I guess I misunderstood on a couple of things... I had thought you were thinking I should lighten the character and shadows etc. 🙂 There is a lot for me to think about... I'm just now starting to learn adjustment layers and how to control them so this will take me some time to figure out :).

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        Alberto M last edited by

        tools I used:
        liquify(to change eyes size and position, arm, neck, ear, hair volume..)
        new layers in different modes: overlay, color (to color even more the shadow zones with the hair's color), soft light, normal
        color adjustment
        hue/saturation adjustment (affecting only magentas)

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        • kai satoshi
          kai satoshi @Alberto M last edited by

          @Alberto-M
          Thanks a bunch Alberto! :). If you can think of any tutorials anywhere that might help me I would love to hear your suggestions. Thanks again! I've got a bunch of stuff I have to do today but I will be playing with this image again when I get time and attempt your suggestions :).

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            Alberto M last edited by Alberto M

            look the tool name and google it, that, then play around, I don't know the exact english name for them

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            • kai satoshi
              kai satoshi @Alberto M last edited by

              @Alberto-M
              I know where all the tools are and blending modes that you mentioned... I'm just not wonderful yet at using them to their potential 😞

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                Alberto M @kai satoshi last edited by

                @Kris-Knight it's about messing around, remember to play with opacity too, because most times it won't help at 100%

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                • kai satoshi
                  kai satoshi @Alberto M last edited by kai satoshi

                  @Alberto-M
                  Here we go again 🙂
                  Subway Girl 3.jpg

                  Played around with a few different adjustment layers as well as messing with the eyes, back, sleeve, chin, ear, hair, rose, background light. Hope this looks like the right direction lol. 🙂

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                  • Leontine
                    Leontine @kai satoshi last edited by

                    @Kris-Knight Love the rendering and the concept. What I think is: why is she looking so sad, wile the colors are so bright? it doesn't seem to fit together. Why is the bow red? can you try to make a version where the colors are toned down? It al seems a bit out of place. The white of the sleeve has to much detail. the rest hasn't got any winkles and suddenly the sleeve has. that looks a bit awkward. If you flip the illustration you can see that the face needs some work, The nose should stick out more. 1438008731501-subway-girl-3.jpg good luck!

                    Leontine
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                    • kai satoshi
                      kai satoshi last edited by kai satoshi

                      Well, Good or Bad I'm going to call this one done. lol What was it Jake said, "Not perfect but done." Something like that anyway. I appreciate all the critiques!!! It gave me lots to think about as well as trying to fix some issues that others saw. Thanks a Bunch!!!

                      Subway Girl 4.jpg

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                      • Rob Smith
                        Rob Smith last edited by

                        I think you ended up with an improved image Kris.

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                        • Leontine
                          Leontine @kai satoshi last edited by

                          @Kris-Knight I agree with Rob. Evey time you make a new one, your improving yourself! Well done!

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