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    Time to Face the truth - Ink Fairy Contest Entry

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    • Jacy13
      Jacy13 @Guest last edited by

      @Molambo I am loving your take on the prompt! It's very unique. Quite dark and menacing fairy design. Also, the expression on Ellie's face is perfect 😃

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      • Blitz55
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        It's coming together. Looking forward to seeing the wings fleshed out. I think they'll be a key feature in this image. 🙂

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        • aska
          aska @Guest last edited by

          @Molambo looks like an interesting story!

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          • ?
            A Former User @Blitz55 last edited by A Former User

            @Blitz55 yeah, the will be the final, did i fuck it up or not part of the image.
            tackling it right now but its still wip. going to darken the outlines down much more and adding more white "shine" to em.

            current wip version
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            i think i should be able to finish it till friday, i dont want to overwork the thin paper so i always let it rest to really dry up before i go and add washes

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            • ?
              A Former User last edited by A Former User

              Final Version
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              Feel free to add suggestions/feedback in case i missed something or could enhance it in your eyes.

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              • MOO
                MOO SVS OG @Guest last edited by MOO

                @Molambo Oh that looks good! When the body in the background wsn't showing it bothered me having the fairy head right behind her head but now it all works and makes sense, her expression, etc. It looks really good!

                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                • ?
                  A Former User @MOO last edited by

                  @MOO
                  the shading and final lineart for sure improved it compared to the first early glance but i guess that's always the case.

                  posture of her is still something that bothers me and as i mentioned earlier in the thread i am redrawing her on a new sheet to see if i can improve her or not but thats something i take my time with regardless the deadline. still in scribble stage and her arms give me more struggle then i would have thought to make em look bend while keeping the overall silhouette.

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                  • MOO
                    MOO SVS OG @Guest last edited by

                    @Molambo Looking at the resource you posted I can see a few things: Notice that her neck is much thinner tan what you drew, the shoulders are more square. and the line from her armpit outling her torso is at more of an angle. Look at the angles and lines in relation to other parts. I like to check the angles with my pencil and find a body part to use as a measuring tool-like the nose length. You have a good drawing there. I think a body is the hardest thing to draw...well, actually I am worse with perrspective but I still have a lot to learn about drawing the human body too. It's definitely looking good, to me 🙂

                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                    • ?
                      A Former User @MOO last edited by

                      @MOO said in Time to Face the truth - Ink Fairy Contest Entry:

                      @Molambo Looking at the resource you posted I can see a few things: Notice that her neck is much thinner tan what you drew, the shoulders are more square. and the line from her armpit outling her torso is at more of an angle. Look at the angles and lines in relation to other parts. I like to check the angles with my pencil and find a body part to use as a measuring tool-like the nose length. You have a good drawing there. I think a body is the hardest thing to draw...well, actually I am worse with perrspective but I still have a lot to learn about drawing the human body too. It's definitely looking good, to me 🙂

                      yeah, the neck is way to big, i mean she could be a swimmer, bodybuilding kid but....eh. thx for the tips, trying to see if i can incoorporate that in how i tackle her.

                      overall i think it turned out okayish as a whole but anatomy, humans are for sure something i have to work on but that goes for a lot of things. building things up with forms no matter what is def something i have to go back to so that i can freely rotate things and add perspective to it but i know thats something i am lacking right now.

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                      • Cole Rts
                        Cole Rts last edited by

                        This is a unique take on the theme, and I love it!

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