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Thanks, I liked the concept but ran out time to really push the story. Did the best with the time I had left.

Hey Everyone! I’ve personally been MIA on this platform for a bit, but I hope I can contribute this month. That said, let’s share our work for December! I made a Christmas card—Did you? I’m excited to see what everyone is working on, festive or otherwise. As always, this is a place for admiration, not critiques.

@Adam-Thornton-0 Hi Adam, thanks so much for the message. It made me reflect on how grateful I am to have been able to work on this book. Best wishes for everything to do with your own art!

@_sadira_ This looks better! I wouldn't change a lot, maybe a little bit more detail in the background and maybe some other magical creature with the okapi, but otherwise it looks great!

I love how you portrayed this narrative without dialogue! Good composition and the dinos' expressions really contribute to it!

@ArtistErin Sounds great! The hand gesture will definitely add more to the rage expression!

Haha, your story is hilarious! 😂 You and your sister were definitely a mischievous duo. I’d love to see you illustrate the scene of you both throwing dirt clods at the neighbor's house and then getting scolded by the Sheriff. Those would be such fun illustrations!

@mzameckaart LOL these are the things I totally love about family life. OMG... I get caught scrolling through silly memes, reels and stuff on social media because I crave it, the goofier the better! Love how you saw this in my piece 😂

Thanks @StudioHannah !

@mag That is a great observation and I'm glad you pointed it out. I'm going to make the changes on my end. It makes me happy to see how the illustration has improved with the right feedback. Thank you so much! 🙂

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IMG_1053.jpeg As per usual, fun sketching while on a plane. Welcoming my favorite time of year.

THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH!!! I am baby artist👶 (new to it)
So thank you for your support I will definitely give it an another pass with your advice in mind!!!😋

@LauraA great work! I'm really happy you finished this illustration. I think it is really clear now that the ice cream is transforming the kids.

@annastenger Thanks!

I also see a lot of improvement, especially in the story telling portion! I do miss the contrast though that really made your mushroom house pop in the first one. I think you could hit the large mushroom and the lizard with more moon light or perhaps he’s carrying a lantern on a stick to introduce a second light source? Also the brown,path (?)passing behind the lizard isn’t reading well, is it a strip of fabric attached to him or perhaps a path? It is very angular compared to all your other shapes so it stands out to me. The solid warm brown color doesn’t seem to fit, don’t know if you need it. Keep at it, you’re so close!

Looking for a sign?
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@Jennifer-Fletcher they felt this type of flyer didn’t warrant the additional budget for coated stock and 4-color printing.

@AustinShurtliff Thank you! I appreciate an open offer for feedback 🙂 It is hard posting when you are a baby illustrator like I am , but I'm working on conquering the fear! There is a lot to take in and learn here, but I appreciate knowing I have somewhere to turn when I need advice on my art!

@menalkhan Oh no, I hadn't noticed your message! But thank you so much, it's nice that the small characters are enjoyable to look at. 🙂