Current work feedback :)
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Hey all,
I would love some general feedback on my current work. I'm aiming for a sort of a papercut /textured look; building details with the basic shapes. I feel like I'm on to something with these. Any feedback would be great.
Thanks,
Tony.
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@Tony-Barber beautiful! what about having a shadow behind the paper cuts to make it look more like it's done traditional?
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Thank you! I've been thinking about adding more shadows to lift the items off the page
Thanks again for the feedback!
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Tony, these are gorgeous! The school bus one is my absolute fave! I think my only feedback would be to incorporate a few curves along with the straight lines. The clouds seem like they could use a few more curves as well as the ghost. But regardless, these are fantastic!
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Kind words, thank you for the feedback! I'll have a play with the sharp shaped lines/edges and find a happy medium.
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@Tony-Barber These are really great. I especially love the first one
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These look great! I love your style!
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@Annaaronson Thank you! Yes, this is one of my favs; It also includes a bit more than just some character work.
Cheers.
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@Kara_Bazley Thank you so much! I'm going for a colorful paper cutout type style. I was thinking of adding split pins into the images.
cheers.
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@Tony-Barber Your color contrast is a joy and I love the way your edges have a slight clunky scissor cut to them. I agree with aprilshin and think some curves might bring this characteristic even more. Have you tried doing one on paper yet? A quick study of these cut out and layered with card stock might help inform your emulations in some odd unanticipated way. Anyways, have fun! These look like a blast!
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These are adorable! I really like the cut paper look and the simplicity of them. The only thing I'd say is that the purple monster has a less paper texture than the bus or other pieces. But keep creating pieces like this and you'll do really well!
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@Tristan-Lapetz said in Current work feedback
:@Tony-Barber Your color contrast is a joy and I love the way your edges have a slight clunky scissor cut to them. I agree with aprilshin and think some curves might bring this characteristic even more. Have you tried doing one on paper yet? A quick study of these cut out and layered with card stock might help inform your emulations in some odd unanticipated way. Anyways, have fun! These look like a blast!
Hey! thanks for the feedback; in response, do mean having some more rounded curves to the clunky scissor look I'm going for?
Cheers.
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@LauraA said in Current work feedback
:These are adorable! I really like the cut paper look and the simplicity of them. The only thing I'd say is that the purple monster has a less paper texture than the bus or other pieces. But keep creating pieces like this and you'll do really well!
The feedback is much appreciated! I think the texture got lost, fighting with the several details of the monster's face.
Thank you
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@Tony-Barber Yes! I was referring to the clunky cut look. I think it could add some nice variation and make it slightly more realistic in a characterful way that I don't think would detract form the style.
Have fun!
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@Tony-Barber said in Current work feedback
slope game:Hey all,
I would love some general feedback on my current work. I'm aiming for a sort of a papercut /textured look; building details with the basic shapes. I feel like I'm on to something with these. Any feedback would be great.
Thanks,
Tony.
These are adorable!
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@sybilminter Thank you
I can imagine these illustrations in a children's book! -
@Tony-Barber said in Current work feedback
slope game:Hey all,
I would love some general feedback on my current work. I'm aiming for a sort of a papercut /textured look; building details with the basic shapes. I feel like I'm on to something with these. Any feedback would be great.
Thanks,
Tony.
They are so awesome.
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@Tony-Barber I love paper cut and paper cut style animations. They are so fun and engaging. As suggested, I think a drop shadow to lift them up and off the page would be really cute. Great work!
