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      Tony Barber @aprilshin last edited by

      @aprilshin

      Kind words, thank you for the feedback! I'll have a play with the sharp shaped lines/edges and find a happy medium.

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      • Annaaronson
        Annaaronson last edited by

        @Tony-Barber These are really great. I especially love the first one 🙂

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          Kara_Bazley last edited by

          These look great! I love your style! 😃

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            Tony Barber @Annaaronson last edited by

            @Annaaronson Thank you! Yes, this is one of my favs; It also includes a bit more than just some character work.

            Cheers.

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              Tony Barber @Kara_Bazley last edited by

              @Kara_Bazley Thank you so much! I'm going for a colorful paper cutout type style. I was thinking of adding split pins into the images.

              cheers.

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              • Tristan Lapetz
                Tristan Lapetz @Tony Barber last edited by

                @Tony-Barber Your color contrast is a joy and I love the way your edges have a slight clunky scissor cut to them. I agree with aprilshin and think some curves might bring this characteristic even more. Have you tried doing one on paper yet? A quick study of these cut out and layered with card stock might help inform your emulations in some odd unanticipated way. Anyways, have fun! These look like a blast!

                Happy creating,
                Tristan

                IG: https://www.instagram.com/t_lapetz/

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                  LauraA SVS OG last edited by

                  These are adorable! I really like the cut paper look and the simplicity of them. The only thing I'd say is that the purple monster has a less paper texture than the bus or other pieces. But keep creating pieces like this and you'll do really well!

                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                  http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                    Tony Barber @Tristan Lapetz last edited by

                    @Tristan-Lapetz said in Current work feedback 🙂:

                    @Tony-Barber Your color contrast is a joy and I love the way your edges have a slight clunky scissor cut to them. I agree with aprilshin and think some curves might bring this characteristic even more. Have you tried doing one on paper yet? A quick study of these cut out and layered with card stock might help inform your emulations in some odd unanticipated way. Anyways, have fun! These look like a blast!

                    Hey! thanks for the feedback; in response, do mean having some more rounded curves to the clunky scissor look I'm going for?

                    Cheers.

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                      Tony Barber @LauraA last edited by

                      @LauraA said in Current work feedback 🙂:

                      These are adorable! I really like the cut paper look and the simplicity of them. The only thing I'd say is that the purple monster has a less paper texture than the bus or other pieces. But keep creating pieces like this and you'll do really well!

                      The feedback is much appreciated! I think the texture got lost, fighting with the several details of the monster's face.

                      Thank you 🙂

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                        Tristan Lapetz @Tony Barber last edited by

                        @Tony-Barber Yes! I was referring to the clunky cut look. I think it could add some nice variation and make it slightly more realistic in a characterful way that I don't think would detract form the style.

                        Have fun!

                        Happy creating,
                        Tristan

                        IG: https://www.instagram.com/t_lapetz/

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                          sybilminter @Tony Barber last edited by

                          @Tony-Barber said in Current work feedback 🙂 slope game:

                          Hey all,

                          I would love some general feedback on my current work. I'm aiming for a sort of a papercut /textured look; building details with the basic shapes. I feel like I'm on to something with these. Any feedback would be great.

                          Thanks,

                          Tony.

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                          These are adorable!

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                            Tony Barber @sybilminter last edited by

                            @sybilminter Thank you 🙂 I can imagine these illustrations in a children's book!

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                              @Tony-Barber said in Current work feedback 🙂 slope game:

                              Hey all,
                              I would love some general feedback on my current work. I'm aiming for a sort of a papercut /textured look; building details with the basic shapes. I feel like I'm on to something with these. Any feedback would be great.
                              Thanks,
                              Tony.
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                              They are so awesome.

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                              • Jessica Jolicoeur
                                Jessica Jolicoeur @Tony Barber last edited by

                                @Tony-Barber I love paper cut and paper cut style animations. They are so fun and engaging. As suggested, I think a drop shadow to lift them up and off the page would be really cute. Great work!

                                Jessica Jolicoeur - https://jessicajolicoeur.wixsite.com/jessicajolicoeur

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