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      Tony Barber @Kara_Bazley last edited by

      @Kara_Bazley Thank you so much! I'm going for a colorful paper cutout type style. I was thinking of adding split pins into the images.

      cheers.

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        Tristan Lapetz @Tony Barber last edited by

        @Tony-Barber Your color contrast is a joy and I love the way your edges have a slight clunky scissor cut to them. I agree with aprilshin and think some curves might bring this characteristic even more. Have you tried doing one on paper yet? A quick study of these cut out and layered with card stock might help inform your emulations in some odd unanticipated way. Anyways, have fun! These look like a blast!

        Happy creating,
        Tristan

        IG: https://www.instagram.com/t_lapetz/

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          LauraA SVS OG last edited by

          These are adorable! I really like the cut paper look and the simplicity of them. The only thing I'd say is that the purple monster has a less paper texture than the bus or other pieces. But keep creating pieces like this and you'll do really well!

          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
          http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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            Tony Barber @Tristan Lapetz last edited by

            @Tristan-Lapetz said in Current work feedback 🙂:

            @Tony-Barber Your color contrast is a joy and I love the way your edges have a slight clunky scissor cut to them. I agree with aprilshin and think some curves might bring this characteristic even more. Have you tried doing one on paper yet? A quick study of these cut out and layered with card stock might help inform your emulations in some odd unanticipated way. Anyways, have fun! These look like a blast!

            Hey! thanks for the feedback; in response, do mean having some more rounded curves to the clunky scissor look I'm going for?

            Cheers.

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              Tony Barber @LauraA last edited by

              @LauraA said in Current work feedback 🙂:

              These are adorable! I really like the cut paper look and the simplicity of them. The only thing I'd say is that the purple monster has a less paper texture than the bus or other pieces. But keep creating pieces like this and you'll do really well!

              The feedback is much appreciated! I think the texture got lost, fighting with the several details of the monster's face.

              Thank you 🙂

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                Tristan Lapetz @Tony Barber last edited by

                @Tony-Barber Yes! I was referring to the clunky cut look. I think it could add some nice variation and make it slightly more realistic in a characterful way that I don't think would detract form the style.

                Have fun!

                Happy creating,
                Tristan

                IG: https://www.instagram.com/t_lapetz/

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                  sybilminter @Tony Barber last edited by

                  @Tony-Barber said in Current work feedback 🙂 slope game:

                  Hey all,

                  I would love some general feedback on my current work. I'm aiming for a sort of a papercut /textured look; building details with the basic shapes. I feel like I'm on to something with these. Any feedback would be great.

                  Thanks,

                  Tony.

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                  These are adorable!

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                    Tony Barber @sybilminter last edited by

                    @sybilminter Thank you 🙂 I can imagine these illustrations in a children's book!

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                      1 slopalice last edited by

                      @Tony-Barber said in Current work feedback 🙂 slope game:

                      Hey all,
                      I would love some general feedback on my current work. I'm aiming for a sort of a papercut /textured look; building details with the basic shapes. I feel like I'm on to something with these. Any feedback would be great.
                      Thanks,
                      Tony.
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                      They are so awesome.

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                        Jessica Jolicoeur @Tony Barber last edited by

                        @Tony-Barber I love paper cut and paper cut style animations. They are so fun and engaging. As suggested, I think a drop shadow to lift them up and off the page would be really cute. Great work!

                        Jessica Jolicoeur - https://jessicajolicoeur.wixsite.com/jessicajolicoeur

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