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    • Kara_Bazley
      Kara_Bazley last edited by

      These look great! I love your style! 😃

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        Tony Barber @Annaaronson last edited by

        @Annaaronson Thank you! Yes, this is one of my favs; It also includes a bit more than just some character work.

        Cheers.

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          Tony Barber @Kara_Bazley last edited by

          @Kara_Bazley Thank you so much! I'm going for a colorful paper cutout type style. I was thinking of adding split pins into the images.

          cheers.

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          • Tristan Lapetz
            Tristan Lapetz @Tony Barber last edited by

            @Tony-Barber Your color contrast is a joy and I love the way your edges have a slight clunky scissor cut to them. I agree with aprilshin and think some curves might bring this characteristic even more. Have you tried doing one on paper yet? A quick study of these cut out and layered with card stock might help inform your emulations in some odd unanticipated way. Anyways, have fun! These look like a blast!

            Happy creating,
            Tristan

            IG: https://www.instagram.com/t_lapetz/

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            • LauraA
              LauraA SVS OG last edited by

              These are adorable! I really like the cut paper look and the simplicity of them. The only thing I'd say is that the purple monster has a less paper texture than the bus or other pieces. But keep creating pieces like this and you'll do really well!

              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
              http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                Tony Barber @Tristan Lapetz last edited by

                @Tristan-Lapetz said in Current work feedback 🙂:

                @Tony-Barber Your color contrast is a joy and I love the way your edges have a slight clunky scissor cut to them. I agree with aprilshin and think some curves might bring this characteristic even more. Have you tried doing one on paper yet? A quick study of these cut out and layered with card stock might help inform your emulations in some odd unanticipated way. Anyways, have fun! These look like a blast!

                Hey! thanks for the feedback; in response, do mean having some more rounded curves to the clunky scissor look I'm going for?

                Cheers.

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                  Tony Barber @LauraA last edited by

                  @LauraA said in Current work feedback 🙂:

                  These are adorable! I really like the cut paper look and the simplicity of them. The only thing I'd say is that the purple monster has a less paper texture than the bus or other pieces. But keep creating pieces like this and you'll do really well!

                  The feedback is much appreciated! I think the texture got lost, fighting with the several details of the monster's face.

                  Thank you 🙂

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                  • Tristan Lapetz
                    Tristan Lapetz @Tony Barber last edited by

                    @Tony-Barber Yes! I was referring to the clunky cut look. I think it could add some nice variation and make it slightly more realistic in a characterful way that I don't think would detract form the style.

                    Have fun!

                    Happy creating,
                    Tristan

                    IG: https://www.instagram.com/t_lapetz/

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                      sybilminter @Tony Barber last edited by

                      @Tony-Barber said in Current work feedback 🙂 slope game:

                      Hey all,

                      I would love some general feedback on my current work. I'm aiming for a sort of a papercut /textured look; building details with the basic shapes. I feel like I'm on to something with these. Any feedback would be great.

                      Thanks,

                      Tony.

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                      These are adorable!

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                        Tony Barber @sybilminter last edited by

                        @sybilminter Thank you 🙂 I can imagine these illustrations in a children's book!

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                        • 1 slopalice
                          1 slopalice last edited by

                          @Tony-Barber said in Current work feedback 🙂 slope game:

                          Hey all,
                          I would love some general feedback on my current work. I'm aiming for a sort of a papercut /textured look; building details with the basic shapes. I feel like I'm on to something with these. Any feedback would be great.
                          Thanks,
                          Tony.
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                          They are so awesome.

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                          • Jessica Jolicoeur
                            Jessica Jolicoeur @Tony Barber last edited by

                            @Tony-Barber I love paper cut and paper cut style animations. They are so fun and engaging. As suggested, I think a drop shadow to lift them up and off the page would be really cute. Great work!

                            Jessica Jolicoeur - https://jessicajolicoeur.wixsite.com/jessicajolicoeur

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