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    • Nyrryl  Cadiz
      Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Tony Barber last edited by

      @Tony-Barber beautiful! what about having a shadow behind the paper cuts to make it look more like it's done traditional? 😃

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        Tony Barber @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

        @Nyrryl-Cadiz

        Thank you! I've been thinking about adding more shadows to lift the items off the page 🙂

        Thanks again for the feedback!

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          aprilshin last edited by

          Tony, these are gorgeous! The school bus one is my absolute fave! I think my only feedback would be to incorporate a few curves along with the straight lines. The clouds seem like they could use a few more curves as well as the ghost. But regardless, these are fantastic!

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            Tony Barber @aprilshin last edited by

            @aprilshin

            Kind words, thank you for the feedback! I'll have a play with the sharp shaped lines/edges and find a happy medium.

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            • Annaaronson
              Annaaronson last edited by

              @Tony-Barber These are really great. I especially love the first one 🙂

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              • Kara_Bazley
                Kara_Bazley last edited by

                These look great! I love your style! 😃

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                  Tony Barber @Annaaronson last edited by

                  @Annaaronson Thank you! Yes, this is one of my favs; It also includes a bit more than just some character work.

                  Cheers.

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                    Tony Barber @Kara_Bazley last edited by

                    @Kara_Bazley Thank you so much! I'm going for a colorful paper cutout type style. I was thinking of adding split pins into the images.

                    cheers.

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                    • Tristan Lapetz
                      Tristan Lapetz @Tony Barber last edited by

                      @Tony-Barber Your color contrast is a joy and I love the way your edges have a slight clunky scissor cut to them. I agree with aprilshin and think some curves might bring this characteristic even more. Have you tried doing one on paper yet? A quick study of these cut out and layered with card stock might help inform your emulations in some odd unanticipated way. Anyways, have fun! These look like a blast!

                      Happy creating,
                      Tristan

                      IG: https://www.instagram.com/t_lapetz/

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                      • LauraA
                        LauraA SVS OG last edited by

                        These are adorable! I really like the cut paper look and the simplicity of them. The only thing I'd say is that the purple monster has a less paper texture than the bus or other pieces. But keep creating pieces like this and you'll do really well!

                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                        http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                          Tony Barber @Tristan Lapetz last edited by

                          @Tristan-Lapetz said in Current work feedback 🙂:

                          @Tony-Barber Your color contrast is a joy and I love the way your edges have a slight clunky scissor cut to them. I agree with aprilshin and think some curves might bring this characteristic even more. Have you tried doing one on paper yet? A quick study of these cut out and layered with card stock might help inform your emulations in some odd unanticipated way. Anyways, have fun! These look like a blast!

                          Hey! thanks for the feedback; in response, do mean having some more rounded curves to the clunky scissor look I'm going for?

                          Cheers.

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                            Tony Barber @LauraA last edited by

                            @LauraA said in Current work feedback 🙂:

                            These are adorable! I really like the cut paper look and the simplicity of them. The only thing I'd say is that the purple monster has a less paper texture than the bus or other pieces. But keep creating pieces like this and you'll do really well!

                            The feedback is much appreciated! I think the texture got lost, fighting with the several details of the monster's face.

                            Thank you 🙂

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                            • Tristan Lapetz
                              Tristan Lapetz @Tony Barber last edited by

                              @Tony-Barber Yes! I was referring to the clunky cut look. I think it could add some nice variation and make it slightly more realistic in a characterful way that I don't think would detract form the style.

                              Have fun!

                              Happy creating,
                              Tristan

                              IG: https://www.instagram.com/t_lapetz/

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                                sybilminter @Tony Barber last edited by

                                @Tony-Barber said in Current work feedback 🙂 slope game:

                                Hey all,

                                I would love some general feedback on my current work. I'm aiming for a sort of a papercut /textured look; building details with the basic shapes. I feel like I'm on to something with these. Any feedback would be great.

                                Thanks,

                                Tony.

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                                These are adorable!

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                                  Tony Barber @sybilminter last edited by

                                  @sybilminter Thank you 🙂 I can imagine these illustrations in a children's book!

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                                    1 slopalice last edited by

                                    @Tony-Barber said in Current work feedback 🙂 slope game:

                                    Hey all,
                                    I would love some general feedback on my current work. I'm aiming for a sort of a papercut /textured look; building details with the basic shapes. I feel like I'm on to something with these. Any feedback would be great.
                                    Thanks,
                                    Tony.
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                                    They are so awesome.

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                                    • Jessica Jolicoeur
                                      Jessica Jolicoeur @Tony Barber last edited by

                                      @Tony-Barber I love paper cut and paper cut style animations. They are so fun and engaging. As suggested, I think a drop shadow to lift them up and off the page would be really cute. Great work!

                                      Jessica Jolicoeur - https://jessicajolicoeur.wixsite.com/jessicajolicoeur

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