Illustration thoughts/feedback...

natiwata

@Lee-White Whoa, very cool reference pics! With these it seems very intentionally not in a realistic perspective, so maybe she needs to go even more in this direction?

Lee White

not necessarily with this piece per se, but definitely as an overall body of work. If this were the only piece in the portfolio to do this, it definitely call attention to itself.

Bobby Aquitania

Also the only line I see needing any kind of fixing is the left top of the wall where the ceiling fits. The perspective draw over with that line fixed, does help you draw your eye back to her in the middle. As to the bed, it could just be not lined up, which makes sense, unless you're some kind of Feng Shui nut who has to line everything up at right angles.

Lydia M

Have you ever heard of Zingerman's? They have good food but I mostly love their catalog because of the bizarre but beautiful product illustrations. I don't know who does them. The wacky perspective we're talking about reminded me. I love it!

Lisa M Griffin

@Lee-White Amazing! I had not heard of this artist before, thanks for sharing. I have been influenced by Júlia Sardà of late - I really enjoy her approach and lighting, use of pattern. I am adding more watercolor textures into my compositions as well thanks to Lee's classes - I find it works well when layering in patterns. And certainly I enjoy seeing how Lee uses perspective in his work, as (in my opinion) it just makes the illustrations more whimsical.

Lisa M Griffin

@gimmehummus these are really interesting spot illustrations. thanks for sharing!

Lydia M

Or remember this??? Haha I'm sorry!

Lisa M Griffin

@gimmehummus Fantastic! I am printing out a copy.

Naroth Kean

I like this! it has very nice mood.

NoWayMe

Really nice work! Love the color and the mood!

I also like the concept of boycutting the rules of perspective in some of the work shown here, it does give a sense of whimsiness... However, I think that in your piece, there is a slight sense of perspective, just enough to give the impression that the incorrect perspective wasn't done on purpose. Maybe by pushing it further like @Natiwata suggested, we would more easily get the feeling that this is your style. I'm not sure though