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    • demotlj
      demotlj SVS OG last edited by

      I worked on a sketch that I had done during Inktober that I never developed of flying squirrels. For Slovember, I did it digitally and ditched it, did it as a line and wash on hot press which looked pretty awful, and did it as a line and wash on cold press which is ok but I'm not in love with it. Here is that last -- watercolor with pencil and brown dip pen. Although I can't make any compositional changes at this point, do you have any suggestions on improving the rendering?

      squirrels small.jpg

      Laurie DeMott
      instagram.com/demotlj

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      • demotlj
        demotlj SVS OG last edited by

        Here's my final version. I don't know that it benefitted from having a month to work on it, but I learned a lot of things that don't work!

        IMG_0754.JPG

        Laurie DeMott
        instagram.com/demotlj

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        • Braxton
          Braxton last edited by

          @demotlj This is really fun! Out of curiosity, how did you go from the first to the second version? Digital adjustments or did you do additional painting?

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          • demotlj
            demotlj SVS OG @Braxton last edited by demotlj

            @Braxton Both. I painted the watercolor so that it was more saturated and added a lot more pen work but then after I took a photo of it, I also did a lot of adjustments in my photo software, mostly to try to get it to look closer to the original.

            I find watercolor difficult to photograph, even when I have the lighting done well, because I think it loses its luminescence when I photograph it. I have the same problem with pencil work -- it looks good to my eye but in the photo it washes out. I adjusted the photo with photo software upping the saturation, the contrast, and the clarity a little, and I adjusted the tint to match the original as best I can. I did some of that on the first photo but without the additional paint and pen work, it didn't help much!

            Laurie DeMott
            instagram.com/demotlj

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            • Braxton
              Braxton last edited by

              @demotlj Nice! You definitely get much better contrast in the second version, and I think the additional line work adds a lot of visual interest. Have you tried scanning the watercolor instead of photographing it? Sometimes I feel like using a scanner removes too much texture, but maybe I'm just not doing it right (or using a nice enough scanner...)

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              • demotlj
                demotlj SVS OG @Braxton last edited by

                @Braxton I have tried scanning but have never been happy with the results. It may be because I have a pretty cheap scanner - just what comes on my super cheap printer.

                Laurie DeMott
                instagram.com/demotlj

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                  I agree I like the warmth the second one brings and super fun concept! Well done mate! I also don’t like the photo quality when I photograph my watercolors, it just doesn’t do justice!

                  Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                  www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                  https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                  • demotlj
                    demotlj SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

                    @powsupermum Thanks. I keep trying to learn to paint digitally so I don't have to worry about photographing my watercolors but so far, I'm pretty bad at it 🙂

                    Laurie DeMott
                    instagram.com/demotlj

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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos @demotlj last edited by

                      @demotlj I am in the same boat I’ve been practicing in procreate pocket on my phone until I get my new tablet. Digital painting is hard! I am not much of a computer person also so I got that going against me...

                      Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                      www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                      https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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