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    • mkeosayian
      mkeosayian last edited by

      Hi Everyone,

      This is my first time posting to this forum. I have some thumbnails for an illustration I am working on and wanted to get some feedback if I could. This is a personal piece of David Attenborough. I have 3 different groups of thumbs that are each a little different.

      Best,
      Marc

      Attenborough Thumbs.jpg

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      • NessIllustration
        NessIllustration Pro @mkeosayian last edited by

        @mkeosayian I love the torn paper concept, but I think maybe the separation should be diagonal! More dynamic this way 🙂 The vertical line = a bit static

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          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @mkeosayian last edited by

          @mkeosayian i agree with @NessIllustration

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          • mkeosayian
            mkeosayian @NessIllustration last edited by

            @NessIllustration thank you, I agree.

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            • mkeosayian
              mkeosayian @NessIllustration last edited by

              @NessIllustration @Nyrryl-Cadiz I'm deciding to move into the direction that has the cut paper, splitting the 2 landscapes. I worked on the actual cut to try and get it less perfectly straight and more organic. what do you think? I'm leaning towards D1 and D2 because I like the pose he's in and the interaction with the environment.

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