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    • erinrew
      erinrew last edited by

      I like it. It has a very Superman ice fortress vibe. If he is a recluse you could make the mailbox a broken down, forgotten thing. And your chimney could blow bubbles or snow or something innovative.

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      • Cayleen
        Cayleen last edited by

        Mailbox: I wonder if you could get a close up shot of a computer screen though a window or something with a 'mailbox' app open on it. Maybe with a 'block all incoming' feature 😉 .

        Chimney: I think you might have to invent your own here. Maybe a stack of flying saucer shapes on a pole? With a bit of smoke to complete the hint that it's a chimney?

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        • Elisa Miko Price
          Elisa Miko Price last edited by

          This is awesome so far!! For a tech-savy yeti, I would suggest a mailbox that looks pretty industrial, like stainless Steel metal box roughy attached to some vertical stand. Or you could even look at a microwave or other kitchen appliances just for design ideas. It might look out of place at first, but you could make it match. Good luck!

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          • K.Flagg
            K.Flagg @erinrew last edited by

            @erinrew ooooh I like the idea of a broken down forgotten mailbox. That would work well I think. Thanks for the imput!

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            • K.Flagg
              K.Flagg @Cayleen last edited by

              @Cayleen that is a great idea for the chimney! The saucer idea is really cool! Thanks for helping, I was so stuck.

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              • K.Flagg
                K.Flagg @Elisa Miko Price last edited by

                @Elisa-Miko-Price Thank you for the suggestion! I might try that. You guys are so helpful 😁

                K.Flagg

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                • KayPotter
                  KayPotter last edited by

                  It is so awesome how well the home and the yeti match up.

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                  • Jeremy Ross
                    Jeremy Ross @K.Flagg last edited by

                    Love the home design @K-Flagg! First thing I said was Wow!

                    Since your Yeti is reclusive, you might want to remove the Christmas lights since that gives off more of a cheerful vibe.

                    The power lines and satellite dish are throwing me off a little because the glowing crystals feel so magical.

                    Just a few thoughts.

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                    • K.Flagg
                      K.Flagg @KayPotter last edited by

                      @KayPotter thanks, I wanted them to make sense together in case I put them in a portfolio.

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                      • K.Flagg
                        K.Flagg last edited by K.Flagg

                        I tried doing the stacked saucers for the chimney but they weren’t coming out and blocked to much of the background. I added some extension cords and more detail. Any last minute advice?

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                        • KaraDaniel
                          KaraDaniel @K.Flagg last edited by

                          @K-Flagg very nice design! I would have to agree with @Jeremy-Ross that the go away sign and inviting Christmas lights creates a bit of a discord for me. Wondering where do the extension cords lead to? I noticed the electric pole is inside the ice cavern.

                          Overall I love it! Great work.

                          Those are my 2 cents lol.

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                          • KayPotter
                            KayPotter @K.Flagg last edited by

                            @K-Flagg
                            I love the combo of ice nature and tech. Also, I’m not getting the lights/sign disconnect. The mailbox with the ignored letters is fun. If I might say though, I feel like visually, it’s competing with your entrance. Could it fit on the right side of the go away sign? It’s really not a big deal, maybe I just really love that glow coming out 😀

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                            • K.Flagg
                              K.Flagg last edited by

                              Okay I removed the colored lights.

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