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    Color again. Please look, comment, help!

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          Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG @MOO last edited by Charlie Eve Ryan

          @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen I think your color is coming along nicely. This is really sweet, it reminds me of Angelina Ballernia. Really sweet characters.

          I think before diving in too much with color, you may want to work a bit more on playing with the composition first. Here is an example.

          -Right now two of the scenes composition are split in half at the middle.

          Try to work in a more dynamic composition, add some more decor to the foreground and walls and use pics or windows to frame your subject. Hope this helps, great work!! 😃

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          Happy Creating
          www.charlieeveryan.com

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            MOO SVS OG last edited by

            Wow! Thanks that really makes a difference! Thanks for looking at it. It's true I have a lot of chopped in half pictures! I have work to do. I'm going to rework these. Good thing i have all the time in the world 🙂

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