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    WIP for March contest, love some feedback !

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    • Isabel Reyes Feeney
      Isabel Reyes Feeney last edited by

      Hello everyone. I would love some feedback on my traveler for the March contest.
      I can’t see if the poses are correct or any mistakes I’ve been staring at it so long! I’ve been driving myself kooky arranging the poses on the page.......I know the running poses hat is overlapping the close up face but is that an issue? I just want to get started on the colour but wanted to be 100% sure it was all in order before I start rendering. I need a second pair of eyes.
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      • Kim Rosenlof
        Kim Rosenlof last edited by

        I think it is looking good thus far. I am not sure about the overlapping hat or not, it doesn't bother me. I think as long as there isn't too much detail that it is hiding then it could be fine. I am not sure what is going on with the hair on the face picture, but maybe it will be more clear once you refine it more. I like all the stuff the character is carrying.

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