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    • Mandy Forte
      Mandy Forte last edited by

      Thank you everyone! I think I am going to work through a few more roughs on them. However I did realize that I made all but the underground one have many buildings. Does an Inn only have one building or do you think it can have many? Most of my research has shown one building but I also thought of in the Disney Cars movie has the Cozy Cone. But maybe that is a hotel. I don’t know if it matters, I am just thinking things out. What do you all think?

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      • Himangi
        Himangi last edited by

        Hi, number one is my favorite, the others are also very interesting. I can’t wait to see how you will paint it. 🙂

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        • lizardillo
          lizardillo @Mandy Forte last edited by

          @Mandy-Forte I would say generally one building for an inn. We have lots of old inns and pubs in England and a lot are old coaching inns where travellers would have stopped for the night so also would have had stables for the horses. If you wanted to have more than one building perhaps you could have one for eating/drinking and one for accommodation?

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          • braden H
            braden H last edited by

            I like the rabbit and the frog ideas as they're easiest to immediately connect to the animals running them (and seeing a rabbit in a maitre D un outfit would be the best thing ever).

            Also, the potential inn/tavern names are just friggin' awesome.

            Frogs:
            The Hop and Holster
            The Leg-mad Sous chef
            The Croak and Wart
            Tadpole's Rest

            Rabbits:
            The Hop and Holster (they both hop!)
            The Flayrah (gotta have some watership down reference in there)
            Carrot and Clover
            The Eagle's Folly
            The Owl's Head (Like, they killed an owl and mounted it's head over the fireplace)
            The Warm Warren

            There's so many optioooooooons!

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            • Mandy Forte
              Mandy Forte last edited by

              Update: so I decided to go with the teapot idea but make it into a single structure (well sort of). What are your thoughts?

              Pardon the very messy sketches, I did them while sitting in the car waiting for my kids to be done with practice.

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              • Mandy Forte
                Mandy Forte last edited by

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                So this is where I am at so far. I have been working on perspective and it is kicking my butt. Does anyone see anything that looks odd before I move on to finalize it? Thank you for you help.

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                • Larue
                  Larue @Mandy Forte last edited by

                  @Mandy-Forte Hi Mandy, It seems to me that the tea pot handle is too small and fragile proportionally to the size of the pot. If you have an actual teapot that you can look at recreating the same point of view you've created here, that would be a big help. Your front windows would also curve and show perspective like your awning as they are on a curved surface also. I love the concept, pretty challenging idea. Looking forward to the final!

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                  • Mandy Forte
                    Mandy Forte @Larue last edited by

                    @Larue thank you. I have been starring at it so much I knew there was something, I just couldn’t figure it out.

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                    • lizardillo
                      lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

                      Hi @Mandy-Forte. I love the teapot idea. I agree with Larue about the windows. The round ones at the top of the main pot might be pointing outward slightly following the curve of the pot if they are the same design as the one above the handle and are not flush the the surface. You may see a bit of the roof bit of them. Also the door at the bottom would be curved like the window on the left of it.

                      I sometimes draw lines on round objects (like longitude and latitude lines a globe to help me follow curved surfaces. I like the hearts in the shutters ♥

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                      • Mandy Forte
                        Mandy Forte last edited by

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                        The final.

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                        • Larue
                          Larue @Mandy Forte last edited by

                          @Mandy-Forte Came out super cute!

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                          • lizardillo
                            lizardillo @Mandy Forte last edited by

                            @Mandy-Forte this is lovely. One thing I would just say is the round windows have a bit of wood on the top that gives the impression they are protruding, but the frames do not. I think they may need a line to give a small 3D impression if they are not flush to the side like the other windows. I have done a really quick line to show the kind of thing I mean, I hope you don’t mind.

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