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    JULY CONTEST: Albert needs a home!

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    • RachelArmington
      RachelArmington @Janette last edited by

      @Janette I love the happy colors of this! I think you are right about the viewer's attention being drawn to the tree. Part of it, I think, is the orange against the blue color contrast. I know people have mixed feelings about grey (there may be a color mixing joke in there somewhere) but if the orange were toned down a bit or darkened, that might help...it would also make the glowy fairy lights stand out even more.

      Did you get a chance to watch Critique Arena live? One of the top 16 had perspective like yours where it's almost flattened...if you didn't see it live, check out the recording. I know Lee said something nice about it.

      I love your color choices and the spiral staircase up an spiral slide down. I see the red paper lantern...are there any other references to your character that would identify him?

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      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Iain Davidson last edited by

        @Iain-Davidson the colors on this one is just adorable

        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
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        • Janette
          Janette @RachelArmington last edited by

          @RachelArmington I watched the live Critique. I do have a hard time making my colours more subdued. I love the contrast in the autumn of the orange leaves against the blue sky. But, you're right. It's hard to maybe see the house.

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          • Janette
            Janette @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

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            • Iain Davidson
              Iain Davidson last edited by

              🀯 wow, wow! I just watched the recording. Thanks so much everyone, was stocked just to make the final 16! Congrats @chrisaakins loved yours too!

              Maybe I could use this piece as the basis for an illustration portfolio, what do you think?

              Born again artist/illustrator.
              IG: http://instagram.com/iain.draws
              IG: http://instagram.com/iain.designs

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              • mag
                mag Pro SVS OG @Iain Davidson last edited by

                @Iain-Davidson absolutely, it’ll make a great portfolio peace! Yours was one of my favourite from the start!

                Mag
                https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
                http://mag.takac.name

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                • K.Flagg
                  K.Flagg @Iain Davidson last edited by

                  @Iain-Davidson defineitly! Yours was my personal favorite. It will make a great portfolio piece. Congrats on a job well done.

                  K.Flagg

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                  • Asyas_illos
                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                    Congratulations @chrisaakins and @Iain-Davidson very nice work by everyone! @mag you were my personal favorite, I love your style!

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                    • chrisaakins
                      chrisaakins @Iain Davidson last edited by

                      @Iain-Davidson You absolutely should. I was glad I was not on your rung of the competition for sure! you did a fantastic job! It's a stellar piece and so very interesting. Congratulations!

                      Chris Akins
                      www.chrisakinsart.com
                      www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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                      • chrisaakins
                        chrisaakins @mag last edited by

                        @mag You did a great job! Yours had so much character! I love your little pig. I hope you write a book with him. If you had been on the top half with me I am sure you would have blown mine out of the water. It had such good storytelling.

                        Chris Akins
                        www.chrisakinsart.com
                        www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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                        • lizardillo
                          lizardillo last edited by

                          Managed to watch the replay. Great stuff going on in the arena πŸ‘ Congrats @chrisaakins and @Iain-Davidson. πŸŽ‰

                          Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                          IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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