Feedback on Character Design
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This is really cool! and I love the story behind it.
My suggestion would be to consider more saturated colours, especially in the toad skin, if it's intended for children. It seems a bit odd to me that the most saturated colours appear to be in the background circle. -
@CukiArtist Thank you and dually noted!
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This is really cool! The only thing I think I could add to the comments already given is that the left eye doesn't quite feel wide/big enough or maybe open enough compared to the right eye. Does that make sense? Good work, this is a neat character!
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@CukiArtist said in Feedback on Character Design:
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This is really cool!! It did make me think that, it IS hard to critique a chaacter design, without knowing what that design is intended for.
A kids show? A grity comic book? A main character? A side character?
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@Frost-Drive Good point! I was totally feeling a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle vibe when I was sketching it out.
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@Frogpunzel Oh I never realized that until you pointed it out. I could explain that he's squinting but I do need make the left eye larger.
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Here is an updated image with added highlights and more saturated colors.
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@Guy-McAlister Now just put 'em on a shirt and sell it to me. Looks nice Guy.
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This looking really nice.. I'm going to suggest (as others did) adding some cool tones... especially where you want to pull focus... consider rim light?
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I think this is an excellent design. If anything had to be changed I would just say that the values could be slightly more contrasting, particularly with the armor and the clothing beneath it.
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@R-Fey-Realme Thank you!
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@Laurasketches Thank you! I appreciate your insight.
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@Griffin Thank you Griffin! I appreciate your comments.
