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    • Guy McAlister
      Guy McAlister @Frogpunzel last edited by

      @Frogpunzel Oh I never realized that until you pointed it out. I could explain that he's squinting but I do need make the left eye larger.

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      • Guy McAlister
        Guy McAlister last edited by

        Here is an updated image with added highlights and more saturated colors.

        Samurai_Toad.jpg

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        • Joshua Chennault
          Joshua Chennault @Guy McAlister last edited by

          @Guy-McAlister Now just put 'em on a shirt and sell it to me. Looks nice Guy.

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          • Fey Realme
            Fey Realme @Joshua Chennault last edited by

            @frownhub seriously

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            • Laurasketches
              Laurasketches last edited by

              This looking really nice.. I'm going to suggest (as others did) adding some cool tones... especially where you want to pull focus... consider rim light?
              Nice work!

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              • Guy McAlister
                Guy McAlister @Guy McAlister last edited by

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                • Guy McAlister
                  Guy McAlister @Joshua Chennault last edited by

                  @frownhub Thank you! I did have 50 printed on an Indigo press at 11X17. If you would like a print send me a DM on Facebook with your address and I'll mail one to you. Cost is $15... my wife has a venmo account at Destini-McAlister to collect payment.

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                  • Griffin McPherson
                    Griffin McPherson last edited by

                    I think this is an excellent design. If anything had to be changed I would just say that the values could be slightly more contrasting, particularly with the armor and the clothing beneath it.

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                    • Guy McAlister
                      Guy McAlister @Fey Realme last edited by

                      @R-Fey-Realme Thank you!

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                      • Guy McAlister
                        Guy McAlister @Laurasketches last edited by

                        @Laurasketches Thank you! I appreciate your insight.

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                        • Guy McAlister
                          Guy McAlister @Griffin McPherson last edited by

                          @Griffin Thank you Griffin! I appreciate your comments.

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