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    • jacs
      jacs last edited by

      Looks lovely! Such an enchanting picture. I really liked the darkness of the first as that made it quite mysterious, but I love the introduction of your giant fish! Happy experimenting!

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      • jacs
        jacs last edited by

        I was just thinking that she looks sad in the first picture and it's like she's fishing for a friend. It would make a lovely story where the whale could take her on amazing adventures!

        Magical, fairy tale art. Www.jacquelinewild.com

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        • Naroth Kean
          Naroth Kean last edited by Naroth Kean

          @jacs Thank you! I'm glad you find it enchanting 🙂 This piece is one of my favorite, and it is actually one of my dreams when I was young. I was sad in the dream that I could not catch any fish in my flooded room haha. I like the idea of going on amazing adventures with that big fish!

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          • bharris
            bharris last edited by

            This is really pretty! I like all the colors you've done, though I agree that bringing back some green into the water would be nice.

            My eyes are a bit confused on you new light source though. In the first you have a lamp, but in the next two there isn't and the lighting is brighter. Is there a candle that I'm missing or is it all from the moon? Sorry if this is an obvious thing! 🙂

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            • Naroth Kean
              Naroth Kean last edited by

              @bharris thank you! I notice the direction of the light does not make sense as well so I removed the moon in emitted piece (have not posted), and put it in the water reflection. I really like the candles idea you have bought up! Maybe a hanging light bulb from the ceiling or something. Thanks again!

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              • Naroth Kean
                Naroth Kean last edited by Naroth Kean

                This small town piece I did couple months back and got all kind of issue. Finally fixed it I think haha. Drawing building has always been my main struggle.
                Before
                sketch-town.jpg

                After
                sketch-town2.jpg

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                • Carrie
                  Carrie last edited by

                  Wow! That is really amazing improvement. I love your tiny details...the cat, balloons with bicycle, the little flowers in the window. Great job!

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                  • Lynn Larson
                    Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                    That one flows so much better!

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                    • Naroth Kean
                      Naroth Kean last edited by

                      @Carrie Thank you! I used to be worried about adding detail but lately I feel much better about it.
                      @Lynn-Larson Thanks Lynn, the previous one is so chaotic haha.

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                      • lmrush
                        lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                        Just lovely-love your style

                        Lisa Rush
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