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    • Thrace
      Thrace last edited by

      I would love a critique of my newest piece. Thanks!april coversmall.jpg

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      • Lynn Larson
        Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

        Such a happy image!! I love the color and feel. I have two suggestions. I would move the butterfly, have her breaking the line of the branch instead of lining up with it, and turn the lower snail so we can see his face. all of the other critters are both facing us. There is a bit of a tangent there as well, the snail facing us looks like she has boobs hehe

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        • Thrace
          Thrace @Lynn Larson last edited by

          @Lynn-Larson oh, haha I hadn't noticed that thanks for pointing that out I will do that!!

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