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    • lpetiti
      lpetiti last edited by

      Hi everyone!

      I’m having so much fun with my Inktober prompts this year and crafting a story that I want to develop these further. Someone at my church even asked me when the book was coming out😂

      In the meantime, I’m hoping to develop some of my sketches into full color images and put them into my fledgling Redbubble shop. I was wondering what you all think of them so far?

      Some of the things I was wondering: do they look appealing? Are they looking “right” (I’ve been using reference photos and have visited my favorite aquariums website more this month than I ever have😂) proportionally? And should I give their eyes character or leave them the blank black that most eyes have?

      Thank you!

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      Website: laurenpetiti.myportfolio.com
      Instagram: @laurenpetiti

      "So the man who really loves God could...paint his pictures, even if no man ever saw them. He knows God looks upon them." - Francis Shaffer.

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        Frogpunzel @lpetiti last edited by

        @lpetiti These are looking nice. Makes me think about trips to the coast when I was little. Maybe more highlight in the eyes? What is a Redbubble shop?

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          lpetiti @Frogpunzel last edited by

          @Frogpunzel Thank you! Yeah, I was thinking about adding highlights when I rework these. It would probably add to the cuteness/appeal

          Website: laurenpetiti.myportfolio.com
          Instagram: @laurenpetiti

          "So the man who really loves God could...paint his pictures, even if no man ever saw them. He knows God looks upon them." - Francis Shaffer.

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