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    • lizardillo
      lizardillo last edited by

      I love this. I really feel for him! He just can't understand why no-one has turned up.

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      • mymightypencil
        mymightypencil last edited by

        Plan B could be 'The hungry tiger' - thanks for suggestions so far guys.

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        • KathrynAdebayo
          KathrynAdebayo @mymightypencil last edited by KathrynAdebayo

          @mymightypencil This is so great… the colors, style, mood - well done! I think the sad tiger actually gives plenty of story. It invites you to wonder why the guests didn’t show up and then you read the names on the cards and start imagining the story. The tiger is so genuinely sad that you wonder if he just wants some friends. I think the sad tiger wins when it comes to story when compared to version 2. And it’s more unusual when compared to the millions of drawings of happy animals in children’s books. Characters feeling sad can make an image really intriguing because our human nature is attracted to finding out why they feel that way or sympathizing with the character. Good luck, and thanks for sharing this really great piece. 🙂

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          • theprairiefox
            theprairiefox @mymightypencil last edited by

            @mymightypencil I really like the sad tiger. I think it adds more story to the piece.

            I wonder though if it would be even more impactful if you made the details feel more like he is a kid who's friends didn't show up to the party. The Mr./Mrs. on the name tags make it feel like he is an adult. So a slight change there could make him feel more like a kid. Another thing you could do is change the candle to reflect his age?

            Just a thought. Love the style and colors.

            -The Prairie Fox
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              jdubz @lizardillo last edited by

              @mymightypencil I think you should stick with Sad Tiger versus Hungry Tiger. I think that has a much heavier emotional impact. That initial idea has a heck of a lot more weight to it.

              Josh White
              https://www.instagram.com/joshwhiteillustration/

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              • mymightypencil
                mymightypencil @jdubz last edited by

                @jdubz thanks. I needed that steer. Appreciated.

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                • mymightypencil
                  mymightypencil @theprairiefox last edited by

                  @theprairiefox this advice was really valuable. I've created a new version based on your feedback and it takes it up another level 👍

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                  • mymightypencil
                    mymightypencil @KathrynAdebayo last edited by

                    @kathrynadebayo thank you. I'm glad you saw what I was going for. I didn't want to be too cliché and go down the jolly, happy route. He's sad because no one turned up to the party and that's that 🥲 I've reverted back to sad tiger and I'm happy with it. Thanks again.

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                    • mymightypencil
                      mymightypencil @JessicaLinnEvans last edited by

                      @jessicalinnevans you noticed the prey! 🤣 thank you

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                      • mymightypencil
                        mymightypencil last edited by

                        Version 3. Thanks for all the advice so far 🤙

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                        • reelynn
                          reelynn @mymightypencil last edited by

                          @mymightypencil I really love this!! I think the additions you made to have him be a child tiger excited about his friends coming is poignant. It’s like the parents wouldn’t take them because he’s a predator. It can be likened to so many things where parents have issues with what the children (or other parents) are and the kids are so much more understanding - religion, race, etc - at least when they are younger.

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