@lee-white Thank you so much!

@asyas_illos Haha😅

@reelynn awesome. I have such a hard time with digital l I enjoy the colors and subject matter. It looks like its straight out of a children’s book

@reelynn So much better! Really sweet. Good job!

I'm not getting any Godzilla vibes, looks great to me! 🙂 My only other thought is that she could be holding her head in a kind of exasperated way? But I like the way her paws fill the space and lead you into the scene, so probably perfect as it is. 🐯 Good luck! Looking forward to seeing the finished piece.

I'm afraid even after reading the description I'm still not entirely sure what's going on. I don't understand why there's a ribbon tied to the kitten. And I didn't know that it was a tiger mask on the back of the cat until I read the description. I think maybe re-visit the concept to clarify the story and start thumbnailing again. You could also play around with illustrating the same story at different moments ie. before, during, and after the initial catnapping. (I'm assuming the tiger kidnapped the kitten originally?)

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Thanks Melissa! I will work on all of your advice! I’ll share as I progress. I’m already in love with Reilly’s spirit.

This is great @AngelinaKizz and to have done it with your non-dominant hand! Amazing!

@lisa-clark 😊 thank you, I didn’t draw for a looong time this past year, but I did do a lot research on where I wanted to go with my style I feel like I’m almost there…

@duh Thank you! I'd love to try that. I need to find more spare minutes!

Here is sort of what I am thinking for finish... though I think I might thin the lines down even further.

Do you like the crayon?

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I am realizing that all the details I added will be very very small to paint. The paper I am using is 8 inches wide so things are minuscule. I don’t have a bigger paper to use right now, so I will try it at that size. If not, maybe I will get a bigger sheet.

@mymightypencil I really love this!! I think the additions you made to have him be a child tiger excited about his friends coming is poignant. It’s like the parents wouldn’t take them because he’s a predator. It can be likened to so many things where parents have issues with what the children (or other parents) are and the kids are so much more understanding - religion, race, etc - at least when they are younger.

@larue well you were lucky then I can’t even find piece in my own bathroom!😭

@reelynn looking good 👍🏼

@melissa-bailey-0 yes they are meant to be having fun, no peril involved. A tiger is a predator so yes it would look like they were attacking them, good point! They would be wearing snorkels, inflatable rings etc. but looking at it now I can see it would be assumed it’s an ambush!

I might do the adult tiger teaching the cubs to swim, one is brave and leaping in and the other is unsure and reluctant to get into the water. POV in water still.

So far so good. I like the way this is turning out. My first thought was that the tiger was crying instead of being fierce. The second thing that caught my eye was the perspective of the bench on one side of the door and the table on the other side. I didn’t check, but are they both going to the same VP. I just looked odd, and if I am looking at the door, should the VP be somewhere just beyond the door itself. I hope this makes sense. Very nice work though. Keep it up.

Hi @carlianne, moved the bed frame ball up to avoid tangent and slapped on some rim lighting on the girl’s hair.

Thanks again for the feedback!

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@kim-rosenlof Oh, now I see it! Thanks!

@r-fey-realme Of course! Good luck!