Kamari WIP (feel free to use too)
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Here is my sketch for this month's prompt. Let me know if you have any feedback and if the concept is clear. I'll have to start pretty quickly to get done in time but can still make adjustments if needed.Feel free to use this thread to ask for your own feedback too. Not used SVS for a while so unsure if there is an official WIP contest thread but would be a good idea if not
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@carrieannebrown love the sketch. The concept seems quite clear to me. Be careful not to have the horizontal line where the floor meets the wall be so close to the centre of the image. Often that can make the composition feel a bit weird.
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@MarcRobinson Ah yeah, good advice. Thanks!
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@carrieannebrown I can't make out well what's on the floor so im not quite getting the story. There is one mean guy and something else. The dog looks great.
