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    • AngelinaKizz
      AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

      @asyas_illos one thing that I find a bit confusing, is the Riley’s Garage. To me, that would imply that the man in the bottom right is Riley. I love where you’re going with it, and I know you’re struggling with the prompt, but you’ve got great skills, and I know you can pull this one off. Is there anyway I see Riley’s face? I preferred when he was just rolling out of the garage, because you could see his expression.

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        ThomCharles last edited by

        I really like the color choices. The placement of the pops of yellow lead your eye to the car. I also like the overlapping building shapes that carry you into the space. Overlapping objects are a great way to create depth. Nice work!

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by Asyas_illos

          @angelinakizz I liked his expression before too, I can’t seem to find that balance of Riley to car ratio lol. And my thing with Riley’s garage is that in the 50s it was common to have Riley senior and junior. I will think about Riley juniors position and see I can find something that works. @ThomCharles Thank you!

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          • Lisa Clark
            Lisa Clark @Asyas_illos last edited by

            @asyas_illos Maybe make him a license plate for his little car that says Riley Jr? That would be fun! I love being able to see your process with this. It really has helped me! Thank you for sharing.

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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos @Lisa Clark last edited by

              @lisa-clark that’s a great idea thank you, yes it’s a bit humbling after whipping out so many last month!

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos last edited by

                Ok y’all I’m done with this one, not sure I’ll do another for the prompt, seeing how I fought myself so much. I may start jumping into next months…
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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                  Well I never go down without a fight, yes, I’m an Aries, hahaha! Anyway I was reading Strega Nona to my youngest the other day and it totally inspired me to get going on a second Riley believe it or not! I thought I didn’t want anything else more to do with this prompt, but that little devil on my shoulder had other plans, so here she is, her past-a-matic works a little too well4C1B326F-5D31-47A5-8DD2-DB553CD5D58F.jpeg

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                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                    What a difference it makes, when you actually feel inspired, huh?

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                    • AngelinaKizz
                      AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                      @asyas_illos oh this one is sooooo cute! And we love Strega Nona here too.

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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                        @angelinakizz thank you, oh to be inspired…

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                          Getting some color down☺️147AD88D-F6CA-4889-BFEF-CA446ADD861D.jpeg

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                          • Asyas_illos
                            Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                            Ok shadows or no shadows? Or just simpler shadows?…
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                              • Miriam
                                Miriam @Asyas_illos last edited by Miriam

                                @asyas_illos I think #3 (the version with light shadows) looks best.

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                                  Asyas_illos @Miriam last edited by

                                  @miriam thank you I agree☺️

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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    Ok adding some last little details, should Riley be besmirched with flour or not she built the contraption but it’s doing all the cooking…🤔
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                                    • AngelinaKizz
                                      AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                      @asyas_illos love it! So cute! I agree with the lighter shading.

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                                      • ruth
                                        ruth @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        @asyas_illos I like the lighter shadows and the flour! The machine looks like it's making a right mess, so I reckon there's probably flour everywhere. 🙂 Very cute!

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                                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                                          @ruth ok thanks for the feedback!
                                          @AngelinaKizz thank you!

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                                          • Asyas_illos
                                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            Ok going for one more...
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