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    Perspective assignment David Hohn. Feedback?

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        TessaW @carolprints2 last edited by

        @carolprints2 Hi! The perspective here is actually really fun, but if we are trying to do more accurate 2 point perspective in a squared room, there are issues with with how you've drawn things in relation to the horizon line and vanishing point guides you've establish.

        1. Using vanishing points- In some places you aren't following the correct vanishing points- Like the window should be following the left vanishing points and not the ones on the right. On the bed, the vanishing lines going to the left don't seem to match up to the vanishing points you've established on the left to serve as guidelines.

        2. Horizon line. If you want to keep the same basic view point of looking down on the scene, you need to either raise the horizon line, or drop the furniture below the horizon line you've established. We shouldn't be able to see the top plane of the bed if it is above the horizon line.

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        I did a draw over, I hope you don't mind. I tried to keep the scene close to your original, and therefore chose to raise the horizon line. I used the perspective of the bed to determine the vanishing point guide.

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          carolprints2 @TessaW last edited by

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          Thanks! I knew there was something wrong. I think I got it now. Starting over

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