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    Need Fresh Eyes Please! Staring at this book cover for too long!

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    • Elizabeth Rose
      Elizabeth Rose @Melissa_Bailey last edited by

      @Melissa_Bailey Oh my goodness! What wonderful suggestions! I really appreciate the time you put into your post and the visuals you made. I totally agree, the background needs to be lighter. I can see that now. Contrast is key for catching ones eye right? And I agree with the mama's squirrel's tail. I had been going back and forth about that. Adding more breath-room for mama squirrel's tail is probably the better option in the long run. Oh boy! I get to make more art in the expanded section under Mama's tail.
      I especially appreciate the title suggestions. I did some fiddling around with the title and arching the "Here I'm" over the "Happy" and making "Happy" larger than the others words.
      Yeah, this is my 10th self-published book. I've only used Ingram Sparks once so far, so I still have some things to learn with it. And yes, I checked the trim sizes a while back. They have 11 x 8.5 landscape style! Thank goodness!

      https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
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      • Elizabeth Rose
        Elizabeth Rose last edited by

        Okay, this is what I ended up with:

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        Thanks so much to the suggestions! They helped so much!
        I will probably do small edits and adjusting before the Release date in September. But so nice to have the Cover Release done and out!

        https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
        https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
        https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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        • Melissa_Bailey
          Melissa_Bailey @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

          @Elizabeth-Rose so glad I could help! Looking forward to seeing your book -- please let us know when it is in print. ❤️

          illustrator - author - smiley person
          mbaileyart.com
          instagram.com/mbaileyart/

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          • Melissa_Bailey
            Melissa_Bailey @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

            @Elizabeth-Rose beautiful. ❤️

            Seeing this mockup, though ... are you printing a hardcover through Ingram Spark? It looks like, from what you showed us, that you used a softcover template from Ingram Spark. Just checking because hardcover books have 0.625 inch wrap that needs to be incorporated into the design, otherwise you may not have the room you think you have. Just wanted to mention it. You may want to double-check your cover template and make sure that it is for the correct binding. 😊

            illustrator - author - smiley person
            mbaileyart.com
            instagram.com/mbaileyart/

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            • Larue
              Larue last edited by

              All the changes look great!

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              • Elizabeth Rose
                Elizabeth Rose @Larue last edited by

                @Larue Thanks!

                https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
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                • Elizabeth Rose
                  Elizabeth Rose @Melissa_Bailey last edited by

                  @Melissa_Bailey Oh yes! I have the extra trimming along the edges for the hard cover. Thanks for mentioning it!
                  Now though, I think I’m going to try to add a bit more to the edges cause I’ve found I love having more of the flowers visible in the final trim.

                  Interesting thing about the 11 x 8.5 inch landscape trim size from Ingram Spark, they actually don’t show hard cover available in their hardcover trim size menu, but if I go to the cover template generator, it offers hard cover in the settings. I tried a few other trim sizes that don’t mention hard cover available and some did and some didn’t. Seems like they need to update their hardcover trim menu.

                  I’m curious, Melissa I’m assuming you’ve worked with Ingram Spark before? Do you have experience doing a preorder period before the book is officially released? This is my first time doing preorder. Just trying to figure out all the things to put on my Book Launch Calendar before and after the preorders open.

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                  https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                  https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                  https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                  • Melissa_Bailey
                    Melissa_Bailey @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                    @Elizabeth-Rose oh good! You already knew about and designed for the wrap! I've made the mistake of designing a cover first for paperback and then trying to adjust to include wrap on the hardcover.

                    To answer your questions, yes, I've worked with Ingram Spark before. I haven't specifically done preorders with Ingram, though. But I know it is possible. Usually, it's something that is coordinated with Amazon, as most preorders go through Amazon, I believe. At least, that's what authors I've worked with have done.

                    Since Ingram Spark and KDP are PODs, most authors just jump into publishing because of the immediacy. It's great that you're being deliberate and have a book launch plan in place. In my experience, a strong marketing strategy makes all the difference!

                    illustrator - author - smiley person
                    mbaileyart.com
                    instagram.com/mbaileyart/

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                    • Elizabeth Rose
                      Elizabeth Rose @Melissa_Bailey last edited by

                      @Melissa_Bailey Yeah, from what I've found Ingram Spark posts to Amazon and yeah, seems like it counts for the preorders too. I've been doing a lot of Self-Publishing podcast and Youtube binges about preorders and marketing. I feel like my brain might explode! so much good info, but I'm gonna take a break from all that this weekend and hopefully get my brain back.
                      And I totally agree about the marketing plan. That's stuff that I've never really dug into until now. I feel like in the past I've thought marketing was super complicated, but I don't think its as bad as I had previously thought.
                      P.S. Here is my Book Launch Calendar I just made this week:
                      (I might be slightly proud of it) 🙂
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                      https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                      https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                      https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                      • Pamela Fraley
                        Pamela Fraley SVS OG @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                        @Elizabeth-Rose It is beautiful! Congratulations!

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                        • Melissa_Bailey
                          Melissa_Bailey @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                          @Elizabeth-Rose well done, you! Beautiful book launch calendar! There's something so completely satisfying about a colorfully organized calendar/planner, isn't there?

                          Please let us know when your book preorders are open. I definitely want a copy!

                          illustrator - author - smiley person
                          mbaileyart.com
                          instagram.com/mbaileyart/

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                          • Elizabeth Rose
                            Elizabeth Rose @Melissa_Bailey last edited by

                            @Melissa_Bailey Oh my yes! There sure is something satisfying indeed about organizing a ToDo list! Also helps to unclog the mind with all the things one is trying to remember. Thanks! And yes, I will post when the pre-orders open!

                            https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                            https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                            https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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